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January 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like the way you weave your story in and out of the book's story. I aamire your invention too, especially getting inside Snape's head. Wainting for the next installment.
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January 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG! You're an evil genius. Evil because that ending was terrifying and a genius because who the hell has the brains to come up with a twist like that.
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January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Snape fall so easily into bad habits and doesn't even realize he's doing it. Such ego as he has the balls to criticize Draco about stuff.
Also, I loved how Harry snuck out to see Draco. ^^
I don't know what Draco expects, but even if Harry doesn't ask Cho out, he's still going to be extremely jealous about anyone he does bring with him. ;)
Keep up the great work!
Also, I loved how Harry snuck out to see Draco. ^^
I don't know what Draco expects, but even if Harry doesn't ask Cho out, he's still going to be extremely jealous about anyone he does bring with him. ;)
Keep up the great work!
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January 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Draco is such a sweetie. ^^ I like that there is more strength and sarcasm and happiness in his speech and actions now. I'm not entirely sure how Harry will take Draco's request, but I never thought much of Harry's crush on Cho, really. Snape's sections were interesting, and I particular liked the line where he acknowledged how he took Harry's mother from Harry. Not just Lily, but Harry's mother. I'm really enjoying how you flesh out both of these relationships with Harry. Great chapter.
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January 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to see what Harry says in response! great Chapter!
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January 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love your story! can't wait for the next chaper!
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January 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great new chapter, the way Draco gets to take the credit for the dragons and the way he plays Severus like a fiddle, it's adorable!!
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January 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 11!!! Will Severus help Harry?
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January 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
bwahahahahaha... ^^
I love how Draco manages to find a silver lining with Harry's misfortune. lol
Great chapter! <3 Keep up the awesome work!
I love how Draco manages to find a silver lining with Harry's misfortune. lol
Great chapter! <3 Keep up the awesome work!
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January 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice work. Thank you very much for updating your story once more. Please do so again when you have the time.