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February 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was intense. Like a Vulcan mind meld.
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February 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was so well done! I loved it.
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February 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
about #19...
Okay, this chapter could 'offically' be called ''Severus Snape...and Draco..to
the Rescue!''
I think this is the FIRST time I've read something like this, Severus fighting
the Dark Lord in someone's mind [well if it has been done before, it wasn't in
this section] and Draco being quick-witted and using a spell that doesn't knock
out a person OR injure them in some fashion. Too bad the 2/3 Trio missed out on such
greatness.
All in all, ya' done good. :-)
Anymore surprises that might be different?
Okay, this chapter could 'offically' be called ''Severus Snape...and Draco..to
the Rescue!''
I think this is the FIRST time I've read something like this, Severus fighting
the Dark Lord in someone's mind [well if it has been done before, it wasn't in
this section] and Draco being quick-witted and using a spell that doesn't knock
out a person OR injure them in some fashion. Too bad the 2/3 Trio missed out on such
greatness.
All in all, ya' done good. :-)
Anymore surprises that might be different?
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February 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i have just one word for you: awesome
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February 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yay! lol ok update again now soon! heh
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February 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Draco finally realized he's in love with Harry Potter! Woo hoo! ^^
I just loved his reaction. hehehe. It was such an eye awakening OMG moment.
Keep up the great work!
I just loved his reaction. hehehe. It was such an eye awakening OMG moment.
Keep up the great work!
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February 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for updating once more. Excellent job, I eagerly await the next installment.
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February 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Bleh it took me like 2 nights of being up tell 4 reading this to catch up, but i did and as always its wonderful...i really really like whats ur doing with harry and snape...because like yes its a harry draco story but its a nice change to have more then one person hes "working with"? idk the right word for it, but like its not just draco and him the story revolves around...but at the same time...the h/s doesnt over power it...lol...on its 4am now im going to bed...cant wait for an update
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February 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
about #17...
Wow!! Damn!!! O_o
Now, that was a deep conversation, without it being ''deep''. To see Severus
open up like that makes me wish the other 2 & Draco would have been there to
witness it, they would have passed out from shock!
How were you able to to get that written like that??? It had emotion, without
it being emotional.
But, at LEAST those two are taking ONE step, now it's time for two more.
Wow!! Damn!!! O_o
Now, that was a deep conversation, without it being ''deep''. To see Severus
open up like that makes me wish the other 2 & Draco would have been there to
witness it, they would have passed out from shock!
How were you able to to get that written like that??? It had emotion, without
it being emotional.
But, at LEAST those two are taking ONE step, now it's time for two more.
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February 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It worries me a bit which other names might be a part of that list or will be a part of that list in the near future; and it makes me hopeful that Umbridge might get her comeuppance by the end of this story, or at least a sweet date with the centaurs...lol. Anyways, goodness. I was hanging on to Sev's story; I think you did a fantastic job with it, even adding parts where Harry felt sick for seeing a genuine smile to make the scene more real. By this time, Severus already knows about the Horcruxes right? I mean, he said that Harry didn't know the true nature of the prophesy. In any case, really happy over the development of their relationship here. It was quite affecting, how you put Snape's arrival on the scene, seeing Lily's eyes filled with pain. Lovely job with this chapter.