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by Lomonaaeren

person SP777
schedule March 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
about #20...

I'm going to tell you right now, as I was reading 'Harry's reflections' towards the end, I had this urge to put on a cheerleading outfit, grab some pom-poms...and
shout ''Go! Go Harry! Go! Go! Go Harry!..'', like that freakin' commercial you hear
on the radio. :-)

Anyway, glad that Harry is finally moving FORWARD.
person MewMew2
schedule February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Outstanding job! I love the imagery you created of Harry stepping forward with arms open wide to embrace his future. Please update once more when you have the time.
person Mangacat
schedule February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, that boy REALLY is a piece of work!!
Cat
person Mangacat
schedule February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh hell.. that was, pheewwwww!!! DAmnit!!
Cat
person minn yun
schedule February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
severus can really take charge when he needs to. even dumbledore yielded to his assertiveness then. when severus said that harry needs a place where he can eat whatever, and how much that he wants to, i can't help but to cry. a lot. wishing harry a healful summer. thank you!
person Mangacat
schedule February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very poetic last scene.. I like where this is going, taking turns that are so different from the original, but so perfectly fit into the same outcome if you will. I 've have that lately, the observation that you can give one and the same plot to two different persons and what comes out will actually be atwo totally different worlds. I think that's awesome. And now I'm going on holiday, but I expect some chapters to welcome me back!!
Cat
schedule February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is really good, I love how you manage to include most of the events of the books and still keep it really original. Can't wait to read more!
schedule February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Alright I finally took a break from devouring your story to review and let me tell you. My interest has not waned even for a second. I am truly hooked and it is only the fact that this is a break between this book and the next. I have to tell you how much I appreciate your take on things and it makes me wish that you could publish an alternate Harry Potter collection to commemorate this story. I guess in your own way you are though...The characterization is brilliant and the complexity of the characters is at once spot on but also wonderfully developed in the what ifs.
schedule February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am not gonna lie...I teared up at the seemingly hopelessness of the situations that Draco and Harry face.
schedule February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I gave myself another break from reading to say this about Draco's last comment...well duh! Now back to my frenzied reading.