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March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What an action-packed chapter! The best yet!
I'm so glad that Snape's back to his normal snarky self again.
What are they going to do with Bellatrix now? I can't see Harry letting them kill her, she can't go back to Azkaban since she''l just break out again, and Dumbledore's out of the question now.
I loved how you wrote the-break-with-Dumbledore scene. And I cannot wait to see what happens next.
Great job! Keep going!
I'm so glad that Snape's back to his normal snarky self again.
What are they going to do with Bellatrix now? I can't see Harry letting them kill her, she can't go back to Azkaban since she''l just break out again, and Dumbledore's out of the question now.
I loved how you wrote the-break-with-Dumbledore scene. And I cannot wait to see what happens next.
Great job! Keep going!
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March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
good god bout time we got rid of that old fool....gee...and THANKS for giving us detales of what harry and draco are doing to disgust snape...THANKS alot
-_- lol hurry and update!!!
-_- lol hurry and update!!!
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March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was a great chapter. I'm so glad you brought Narcissa into this story and made her so strong.
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March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ohmygosh!ohmygosh!ohmygosh!ohmygosh!ohmygosh!ohmygosh!ohmygosh!ohmygosh!ohmygosh!
8D
8D
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March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic job! Please continue to update when possible.
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March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
When I think of Draco's kiss of Harry on the stairs, I picture that famous post-war picture of the sailor and his girl. =^^=
Also, I think you're probably right about Dumbledore and why he went and got himself poisoned in the first place. He probably went and did put on the ring to communicate with ghosts. Idiot.
Keep up the good work!
Also, I think you're probably right about Dumbledore and why he went and got himself poisoned in the first place. He probably went and did put on the ring to communicate with ghosts. Idiot.
Keep up the good work!
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March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! I sooo need chapter 26!!! Dumbledore attacked them! They're leaving Hogwarts! Holy moly!!!
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March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OH DAMN! Flippin' awesome, action-packed chapter. I knew Dumbledore was up to something...but I was not expecting THAT! Oh man, where are they gonna go now? So stoked for next chapter!
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March 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
about #24...
1. Well, it's official, you are DEFINITELY getting better at the action-packed
scenes in your stories as time goes on. Maybe one day you'll bite the bullet and
see how well you do in a story based on humor...or something involving Quidditch. :-)
2. Being a reader who relies heavily on description in a story so I can get a
visual...in my head. At this point in the story, would Harry be 16 now? Plus,
how tall would he be in your story compared to Draco?
3. You know, Narcissa seems a little TOO calm for someone who almost got blown to
bits, I would have at least been a wee bit miffed.
1. Well, it's official, you are DEFINITELY getting better at the action-packed
scenes in your stories as time goes on. Maybe one day you'll bite the bullet and
see how well you do in a story based on humor...or something involving Quidditch. :-)
2. Being a reader who relies heavily on description in a story so I can get a
visual...in my head. At this point in the story, would Harry be 16 now? Plus,
how tall would he be in your story compared to Draco?
3. You know, Narcissa seems a little TOO calm for someone who almost got blown to
bits, I would have at least been a wee bit miffed.
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March 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I knew it was Bella!! I knew she was the one making Snape afraid so much!! And I bet anything that Bella (and Snape but I know he's not evil so I'm not going to add him on here) is going to AK Harry but instead of killing Harry Bella kills the Horcrux in Harry. Yes, that's what I think will happen.
and I like how you have Snape running threw Hogwarts this time like he did in the book.
and I like how you have Snape running threw Hogwarts this time like he did in the book.