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by Lomonaaeren

person SP777
schedule April 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
about #26...

1. To be bring an old subject up, sooo...how tall IS Draco?

2. I'll tell you now, I prefer Snape, Narcissa and Draco by Harry's side than
Ron & Hermione, because of the experience and level-headedness they exhibit.
Doesn't it make you WISH JK Rowling thought that far ahead???

3. I see you're going to relent and go for....ACTION-PACKED!!!!! :D
*ahem* I think that will be good.

4. How many more chaps. on this one? By the way, nice touch on the Harry/Slytherin
confrontation against Dumbeldore.

..and that's it for now.
schedule April 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is getting really, really good. I like that Harry now is taking more control of his role in the war, and that he has a lot more answers than he ever did in any of the books. It was kind of messed up that everything was always hidden from him even though he was the first person that needed to know, but thankfully he knows a lot of that information now. It's good that Harry is trusting Snape now, because I think that they are two characters that can really have a deep understanding of each other, since they have been through a lot of similiar crap. I love Draco in this, and I like how his relationship with Harry is developing. That last part was really hot, they two of them are so sexy together! I really hope that Sirius heals completely, because it would be sad if he doesn't. I look forward to reading the next chpater and finding out what happens!
schedule April 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 26

This actually took me nearly three days to read (I generally read quickly, and I ended up staying up really late last night to read more, because I absolutely loathed the idea of going to bed without knowing what was going to happen next)

You have absolutely no idea how thrilled I was that this was so long, and perfect, and just... well, I've already used perfect. XDD There's no words in the English language to tell you how much I love this fic. I'm going to be haunting your page just so I know when this is updated again. If you have some sort of mailing list, I would absolutely adore to be on it, and know when you update.
schedule April 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YAY! I'm glad he finaly completly trusts Severus now. Will they continue to have problems in the future? I'm curious as to whether Harry's going to allow Severus to heal his mind or not. This was a good chapter! I like the way Draco and Harry's relationship has progressed. ;) I'll be looking foreward to the next chapter.
schedule April 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What a major bridge to cross! I sooooo need chapter 27!!! Will Harry go get the tiara or will he send Hermione and Ron for it?
schedule April 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Agreed. Draco is good for making Harry take a break. And Harry needs those because if you can't think clearly then you're no good to work and not having breaks (or sleeping well) will go that to you. So I really like that ^^ I also like how fast Harry found out about the tiara at Hogwarts. Goes back to what I said before, this group they have is much better then that in the seventh book.

Great chapter!! Hoping to read the next one soon ^^
schedule April 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOOT! More pieces of the puzzle coming together. I can't wait for more!
person MewMew2
schedule April 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent job! I love the progression of Snape's relationship with Harry, as it is you've done an excellent job of writhing Snape as a character. Please update once more when you find the time.
schedule March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just read your entire story in two days. It's really good!! I love how detailed the plot it. I think how you put Severus, Mrs. Malfloy, Harry, and Draco together as a group was a really good. It certainly seems like this story will get even better.
schedule March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit. That was...holy shit O.O

Yes I do like how you have both HBP and DH going on here and how Harry left school and (I bet) wont be back for his seventh year. I love the Snape, Narcissa and Draco are the ones helping Harry and not Ron and Hermione. No matter how smart Hermione is or how brave Ron is, they wouldn't be able to help Harry in a ways Snape, Narcissa and Draco can. And even though in DH they won the war, I know that things wouldn't have gotten as bad as they did in the book with Harry had more people to help him then just two seventeen year olds who never finished their schooling. Having a death eater and a wife of a death eater is good for Harry. He'll have information on Tom that he wouldn't have before and with Draco there, Harry has a stronger reason to fight. And Draco, knowing the dark arts as he dose, is better then Ron or Hermione.

LOL, as you can see, I have problems with DH. I really can't wait for the rest of this story. I'm very excited for what you do from here on out. And how you have Harry win the war (please win the war...and please let there be a happy ending).