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for Inter Vivos

by Lomonaaeren

schedule August 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear god this is sooooooooooooooooooooooooo good, my first statement still goes! Better than the original!
person Anon
schedule August 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I am always halfway
I love this story.
It.s perfection.
in my mind it is better than the original so far.
thank you.
Severus1snape
person staar
schedule January 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
just to say loved this top !!!!!!!!!
schedule October 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful! I absolutely loved it!
schedule September 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This was amazing and awesome and the ending made me tear up ;-;! Another incredible work, thank you as ever and always!
person Jester
schedule June 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
The whole developement is awesome. I had no trouble believing Draco trying so much to be Harrys friend.
And it just seemed so natural when they came together.
Also Severus tring so hard and failing so often... it was quite hard to watch, but every time he succeeded
in making Harry trust him became worth so much more.
I felt quite sad for Narcissas death, but well I figure one had to die. Actually I expected Sirius to die too.
Thanks for this story. I had some nice days with it!
schedule April 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 10 was the first major turning point in this story for me. The moment Draco redirected his own pride to support Harry when no one else would believe him was brilliant. It was the champion naming incident that represented the final shift in their relationship that set them towards something deeper.
person Nixie
schedule February 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
what is the make up of his new wand?
person Darkless
schedule March 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hey there! I was checking out some stories I know I read before, but upon reading the 'end' here, I realized it hadn't been finished when I originally read it. I read so many stories, sometimes unfinished ones get forgotten (or they just remain unfinished, very sad) and I'm glad to see this one completed.

Great job. Always a pleasure to read one of your stories with the excellent spelling & grammar, easy to enjoy without having to interpret bad choices in the 'spell check' (although I've learned that those things are secondary to the much more desired skill of actually weaving a tale, 'tis just the sweet topping to an already delicious cake, so I've learned to hang up my spelling-nazi uniform and leave it in the back of the closet) and I'm glad that this story found its ending. I think you wrapped it up rather nicely. Thank you for sharing your skills.
person Ci-Ci
schedule January 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! This was one of the most epic and wonderful stories I have ever had the siincere pleasure of reading!! I have tears in my eyes at the ending and am so incredibly sad it has ended, but I am so beyond satisfied with the way it ended. I adore that it has flowed so naturally into this great and perfect ending that makes me want to knwo more about life for the characters after this, but completely satisfied with my imaginings instead of ur direction.

Thank you so much for this story. I really appreciate having the chance to read and experience it and just know you are now one of my few favorite authors, even if I never like another of your stories.