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for The Granger Chronicle

by LolaDiBlack

schedule March 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this was disjointed, weird, quirky, fast-paced and I LOVED IT! I felt like I was on a super rushed elevator that kept stopping abruptly on different floors with the doors slamming open to show me the scene inside only to shut again and whiz off to another floor....I'm exhausted. GREAT.
schedule March 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
what the hell just happened? I think Kali is her sister and this is bigger than mere mortals can decipher...um, how does Draco fit in?
person tals
schedule January 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
some editing mistakes. some parts are given less attention than others. over all a good plot and interesting.
schedule January 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
To margaritama

well darling, I do not have a beta...and well I let you my emails here so will be able to stay in contact due to my laptop's charger is currently broken and I don't know when I will be able to update anything...

Loladiblack@hotmail.com
Loladiblack@gmail.com


Happy New Year
take care

Love
Lola
schedule January 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter and I have my ideas about Kali after Dumbledore's speech.

Do you need a beta?
schedule December 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sigh - still a mystery...its obvious Draco likes Hermione. That scene with Snape proved that, he just doesn't know it yet.

As for Kali and Hermione, well I'm still stumped. Still think there's some secret society - actually Hermione is reminding me of Sydney Bristow from Alias in a way. And the headmaster has said nothing, think the headmaster (sorry is it Minerva?) knows more for not reprimanding our head girl at all.
person Lifvared
schedule December 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice! This looks really cool! What's Draco plotting now? And... Why Hermione hates so much Kali, is it something in her past? I think I know why, but I'm not gonna tell, Shhhh! It's a Secret! Lol! Anyways update soon, I'm courious of Draco's plan... XD!

Take Care,
Misha
schedule December 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooh, i will!!!
schedule December 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I have a feeling that Kali might have been Hermione's tutor or something in the past. I suspect Hermione isn't who we think she is and might be trying to escape from a certain fate/world??? LOVE THE FIGHT SCENE - Bad ASS
schedule December 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i really like it!