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wait wait wait do the all think Hermione has cheated on Ron, has Hermione had a past with Draco and she doesn't remember? Man this is so cool!
Is that why Ron jumped on her with ginny? all these question's need answers this is to freaking awesome! I think I'm fairly certain Draco is in her dreams you wrote it in this one that it's almost like he's forced to be there, knowingly and also i loved the whole Pandora's box thing will that come into play later? Man oh man what a good chapter! And another thing how dose everyone treat draco and the returning slytherines? what happened to goyle is he still at school, did Draco ever say, "hey harry you know thanks for saving my life and such." somehow I can't imagine that, or you know there's that whole scene where he watches her get tortured by her aunt, so I'm wondering if you plan to use it, either way this stories brilliant! That was a very amazing open scene about Hermione admitting how draco makes her feel. For a seconded I thought maybe he would feel guilty ans then you had her wake up. Of course one could argue maybe he already dose feel guilty, that was a great dream! I'm finding them very refreshing!

I CANNOT WAIT TO SEE THE NEXT CHAPTER! Is there really something pansy knows that draco doesn't poor hermione is draco just messing with hermiones mind? No, I like to believe they always have some sort of connection man i love this story and I know that so people have complained about hermione and her behavior towards harry in this story but i think they have been like that in other original stories as well I've always seen them to be like siblings and I really think it's neat the way harry and all of them recognize that hermione may be hiding something as far as maybe her dreams aren't about ron. Poor ron and poor harry and poor hermione i hope they all make up soon, and i really want that next chapter up soon as well-thanks for the damn good read!

Mrs. Olwsworth that was a frustratingly good opening and I'm so glad to see that your turning it into a longer story, the funny thing was I read this back during Christmas and I felt several things-1-arg it was a dream! 2- well it was cute and sweet and let's face it I love Harry and Ginny 3- I love the exploration of all the characters in the series it's refreshing and outside of just Draco and Hermione. Also I think every artist has a style and it's so funny I never saw it before! I mean I saw a well written story but it wasn't mainly Hermione and Draco dialogue when you got to that point I could see it clear as day! But I think that's my point I think a really good artist knows how to utilize tools to do different kinds of works, I mean you don't want all you songs to sound the same, or all you art to look the same so why should writing be any different? I've always loved writing but never possessed the style for it, it lies for me more in music and art so I have to say that this bit of growth is quite cool and I'm envious of how well your pulling it off! Great idea on keeping the pen name totally! I think it's neat that even the narrator sounds different, chapter one dose sound kind of errie like a dream but then when it ends like a dream your like "ah come on seriously your breaking my balls here man!-" I almost made a comment but I thought well it's just a little fic-let for the holidays it wouldn't have been bad it would have been more along the lines for an extension and I thought some pwople get tried of those things -how funny huh?

Hermione is quite the bitch in this fic. if I was Harry I would have punched her in the face. and I don't mean he tries and she bests him, thats just cruel and unusual. I just don't see where he should have to apologize, shes the one not listening and being mean.

Liked the fifth chapter very much. Still looks as though you're setting up the pieces on your chessboard. Te Gryffindors' reactions seem odd, though. As buttoned-up as the Brits are, why would they keep hounding Hermione about a personal matter? Anyway, update when you can, and I hope the virus doesn't hit you too hard. :D

I'm still wondering about Draco...what is going through that man's head? I love Pansy and hope she's not an evit witch in this story, I think she and Hermione have more in common than they think.

I must have missed when this was updated. A really great third chapter. Loved the crystal ball's foreshadowing. And Hermione's emotional magic just obliterating the ball. :D

So glad you updated, again. I agree, the opening chapters need to set the tone for the piece, and I think you've succeeded well. We know these dreams are harbingers, and Hermione's continued refusal to accept the worth of a Divination class helps her to ignore the signs. Can't wait for the rest. :D

Breenieweenie makes the BEST trailers.

I've just re-caught on this story and realized how much I like it. I love the mystery, sub-text, hidden messages, unexplored emotions, unknown desires and strangely silent Draco (except for her dreams).

Hermione obviously has some hidden talent that perhaps the Slytherins see/sense, per Pansy's comment and Draco's cryptic sentence. I love this story and hope to see more.

PS: Seasmus' hands as hams was hilarious.

Not sure how i missed this story, but i am glad I found it!

A very intriguing start, with the dreams and divination! I certainly cannot wait to see where it all leads! =)

Lady B*