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December 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
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December 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this would easily work as a sequel or just add to it. you can begin with the men's reactions to waking up afterwards.
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December 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
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December 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Write on, my dear, write on!! This was good. Thanks!
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December 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes, sequel please! This was very nice and hot, and I would love to see the men going after the girls (or something). These couples certainly have the potential for lots more :)
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December 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was such a sad ending for an uplifting story. I really hope you continue, I can't imagine Severus and Lucius just letting them leave like that.
I almost cried, the girls seemed so convinced that the men wouldn't want them there in the morning. Here's too hoping that you'll continue this story.
I almost cried, the girls seemed so convinced that the men wouldn't want them there in the morning. Here's too hoping that you'll continue this story.
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December 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this, I liked the surprise of them both leaving - I expected them not to! Please keep writing I can't bear for it to end just like that. Send the men out on a reconnaissance mission, sharpish! Thanks again, Merry Christmas!
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December 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You should definitely write a sequel! I don't imagine either men wanting to let them go. Awesome story!
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December 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very Nice
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December 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh lovely, pity it ends there. Though I'd imagine any sequel would include 'the boys' tracking them down with lots of wonderfully angry sex.