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Um, no. That's not what happened. She almost drank it, but she didn't. It, uh...disappeared before she could swallow it. And, they're NOT going to rape her. No, she's going to get saved, yes, that's it. And, they are going to be hurt BADLY for what they TRIED BUT DIDN'T SUCCEED in doing to her. ARGH!!!!

Okay, back to sanity. Sigh. Your writing it terrific and the story is simply captivating. I can't say I like all of your characters (damn Nott and Goyle to the pits of Hell! grumble grumble grumble), but I love your characterizations. I look forward to seeing you somehow get her out of this mess, now that all seems completely lost. :-(

Can you tell I am enjoying it? lol Seriously, thank you. This is really good.

Interesting song choice! ;) And how appropriate. LOL I don't imagine Nott really knows what he's doing, he doesn't understand the full implications of what he has been asked to do but I am sure he will. I like that you did not make him ugly. The Dark Side does have its own attractions and it is not until that deception is revealled do we understand the ugliness trembling just below the surface.

Oh and there's plenty of Nott to gon around, is there? He doesn't realise what a scorned woman can do either then? I almost feel sorry for him. LOL Sounds like quite the party going on at Goyles too. LOL Very interesting. Oh and Goyle's got it going on now too, one surprise after the other, hey?

Hot damn woman - did I miss the 'hot stuff here' warning? LOL Suddenly I feel like I'm missing out not being at this party. LMAO *cough* That was......delish! Feel free to write more of that stuff. haha!!

I like this story - very complex and rich. Like Theo taking a central role.

I have a feeling there is a bit of a set up in Chapter 4 that might lead to more Draco/Hermione interaction. Hopefully Theo won't get his way and Hermione will be rescued before anything unpleasant can happen or before he can make her swallow this poison. It'll be interesting to see how she is crucial to the war and why Voldemort wants her out of the way.

I have a few choice words for your Nott and Goyle, but I am going to refrain from cursing. lol Golly day! What assholes!!!!! Oops, sorry. But, they are! And, now you have praying for another update REALLY SOON, so that we can see that he fails and gets punished SEVERELY! But, alas, as you are only at the beginning of the story, I dont believe I will get my wish. lol Well, update soon anyway, please, because I need to know what happens next! Thanks! G4eva

Wow, Blaise has a sister, what an interesting twist. It sounds like Blaise is doing this for someone else but Draco is doing it for himself - well as it appears so far but I really do have to wonder if that's the only reason. ;) Or is there another reason that he doesn't know of yet. LOL Now who exactly are those who don't trust the delicious duo? After all, they all agreed on the truth serum approach.......

Much like the group in the room, I was interested in Blaise's answers, but really wanted to hear Draco's. Job very well done! I look forward to seeing this group get to know one another and learn to work together. I have a feeling Ron isn't going to make it easy. Thanks! HG4eva

Ah Ron, of course he would be suspicious but I suppose someone has to match Draco for melodrama. LOL I wondered what would have to be done to convince the DA of Blaise' and Draco's sincerity - I didn't think of the truth serum. Love that Hermione took it upon herself to approach the boys and ask what they thought of the conditions of entry into Harry's world, so to speak. I was waiting for Draco to go spare but it would appear that Blaise is a rather maturing influence on him. Still he could only keep things reigned in for so long. LOL I wonder if they realised how thoughtful Hermione was being by telling them of the rumours she'd heard? And uh oh, what exactly is one Theodore Nott up to?????

I'm so glad you decided not to hold on to this but started posting istead. Yay!!! And I LOVE stories where we get to see their inner thoughts and why they react the way the do. Double yay!! Believe me, I enjoyed it. Looking forward to more. :)

yes! cant wait

Hey LBE. Yeah, I get to repay all your kind words to me and give you reviews. I say yeah, because I am already enjoying this story a lot. I like the premise and the tenseness of the beginning. I have a picture in my head of your Draco and Blaise, and even your Nott (evil git!) and their pain and angst and I love it. Hermione being the one to tell them about the truth serum was nicely done. It made sense in her character and was an excellent way for her to start to see the new Draco. I look forward to loads more soon. Thank you, hon! HG4eva

This is such an exciting start to the fic!I love Blaise and of course, my Draco :P (Hes no Edward but whatever...LOL)

I honestly didn't expect you to post this so soon! Why the hell didn't you tell me Lady? Ahh, well, nevermind. It looks to be a very promising fic and I am really excited for the rest. I just hope you will finish it, while your buzz is so strong! I know having read the chapters to come, there are so suprises in store!

Looking forward to getting stuck into it!

Love and snuggles, and Christmas cuddles!

~LadyVoldemort87~
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