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Chapter 16 is having problems

I'm sorry it's been so long since I've reviewed! Being seven months pregnant and a teacher curiously keeps you occupied. :) As usual, your writing and story is supurb. I love the direction in which you're taking it and I felt the anguish Draco was experiencing over the Hogsmeade trip. I just don't see how they will not end up together. I think once Hermione accepts that, sadly, she is not as enamored with Ron as she thought she was, she will be able to focus her energy on Draco. Good luck with the next chapter- I will patiently await an update....

This is soo good but pls keep them coming.. I hope this one is a long one... Lourdes

I was very surprise on the similaries of this and Adsmo Fideiitas... I will keep you uphold to the promise of finishing I really really hope so.. I love the way this is taking out specially with the compromise they both did... My only sugestion will be a change or heart for Narcissa and Lucius not now but at the end, which I want to remind you be a happy ever after even if it looks not doable or maybe ready for a sequel.... too soon for that .. Lourdes

This is great! ^_^ Really been enjoying the read. Draco is a little nicer than normal, but hey, it doesn't ruin his appeal or anything. Please update soon! =D

I waited til I'd read all the chapters up before reviewing. I like the plot, and the character development you have to date. A novel way of interweaving Book 6. I also think the slight 'Regency' style of dialogue you have between the characters to be endearing. Keep up the good work. :D

I agree- there is so little about Hermione

Love it, love it, love it! I was so glad to see your inspiration for this story, Adamo Fidelitas. I previously enjoyed that story, too, but I have to say that I think I'm enjoying your version more. Of course, I give full respect to Pixie Zombie and her creativeness. I just really love how you gave us a great background story on Draco, his family, and his engagement to Pansy. And, although Draco and Hermione might be acting OOC, who cares? We don't know how they would act if they were given a lust potion in canon. Who's to say that Draco wouldn't adore her breasts and tell her so? I love their witty interactions and I can't wait to read more! Update soon, please!

Ah, the plot thickens, I'm liking it!

You have got to update soon. I know you barely updated and all, but I am so much a fan of Adamo Fidelitas and wish for Pixie to finish it, but she has not. Are you posting on another site? You are doing a good job.
Liz