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for Lust, War and... Love?

by linkar

schedule May 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a good one but i want more! Still want to kick Draco's ass for being an asshole! I wonder how long it will take for him to know that Hermione is spying on him?
person kazfeist
schedule May 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I thought I'd review again at this point. I liked the plot progression so far! Realistic on Hermione's part, though Draco's language change seemed too 'cute' for his previous personality, even if transformed by the potion. Can't wait for the rest of the story. :D
person kazfeist
schedule May 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was a hoot! Typical Malfoy and Granger interests. :D
person kazfeist
schedule May 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like how you've entwined the actual events of the sixth book into your plot. Well done! :D
person kazfeist
schedule May 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting plot advancement. I like the fact that you've got plots within plots in this story.
person kazfeist
schedule May 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Funny how Draco's world is so skewed. :D
schedule May 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is so good ... for a moment just a moment I thought that this could be abandoned as well, I am glad that you are updating. Please keep them coming.
schedule May 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG! How could Draco tell Hermione straight to her face that he wanted her to be a mistress only? How dumb could he be to think that Hermione would be elated to be just that? Still the arrogant prat after all! He doesnt even know that he insulted Hermione and their love by saying that! What a letdown for Hermione! I feel like crying, too! I think it's time to move on.....

Did i say that i absolutely love this story? I'll keep on praying for a speedy update!
person kazfeist
schedule May 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Finally got a chance to start this! Thought I ought to go back to the beginning and see how things developed to where they were, in your world. Great start! :D
schedule March 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this story so far. I really like the way you make her so conflicted but still have to act the part.

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