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for Lust, War and... Love?

by linkar

person MotekElm
schedule March 30, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Story is abandoned just as it was getting exciting. Still overall good though and a nice background story for the author's oneshots. 

schedule January 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic first chapter!
Reading on...
person jaceni50
schedule February 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Interesting! Can't wait to see what happens next and hope you don't take to long to update. :)
schedule December 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant!, Love, drama, and mischive, what else could we ask? Well.......... I leave it to the writer imagination.......LOL Happy 2010!
person kazfeist
schedule June 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Just letting you know I got caught up! :D
person Violet
schedule June 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have enjoyed this story imensely so far and this chapter was particularly excellent. I really appreciate your characterization of Draco, but Hermione's is especially pitch-perfect, I like that you don't write her as some hysterical, sentimental girl and respect her intellingence, when Draco was ranting about his family, for example, I liked that Hermione wasn't getting upset or judgemental she was staying calm and listening, which is very in character for this story. Can't wait for the next chapter!
schedule June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A fight, a mistrust, an alliance, a truth, friendship, lust, love, war, OMG I am exhausted in a good way of course.. This had been a rollercoaster.. Please more!!!!!!!!!!
schedule June 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Life is really so hard for the couple! Their world is getting smaller and smaller everyday. I wonder how long before their relationship is revealed to everyone? Pansy is such a pain in the ass! They should find a way to get rid of her!

Nice chapter! Looking forward to more!
schedule June 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A few things.. Keep them coming, Pansy and Blaise need a kick in the butt... A little catfight never hurt anyone(evil grin) of course Hermione as the winner even if she is in the Hospital Wing... and I most forget Ron.... oh yes he needs a little too, so he could know what he miss.........
person kazfeist
schedule May 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loved the most recent chapter! I like the Patil/Slytherin pairings very much! Hopefully, they'll continue in the future of your world, though I can't remember your mentioning them in any of the one-shots~ :D