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for Proof of Life

by emilywaters

schedule September 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really loved their banter here. I loved how Severus was so direct and matter of fact, but he was also using that to push Harry away even as they were coming closer together physically. I loved that Harry was resistant to it and how open he was about his feelings. Severus really needs that, especially because he's so quick to run away when things get awkward. I'm sure it's easier for him to imagine the worse and use that to avoid anything that can bring more pain. I really enjoyed this coming together, it was at the right time and you executed it perfectly.
schedule September 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I LOVED the whole Lily/Severus interaction. And Severus flying again, without difficulty, that was awesome! Harry giving Lily to him to take along showed an incredible amount of trust. That was a beautiful scene. I'm glad that Harry and Ginny are on good terms and there's no lingering jealousy or resentment. I'm concerned about Draco and who's following him. ::bites lip:::
person Josie
schedule September 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! Its been a while since I've checked for updates and was fortunate to find 2 new chapters to read. You've made my day! Awesome work, I'm interested in where this story is going. Can't wait to see more!
person QueenB
schedule September 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 45 I
person QueenB
schedule September 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 46 That explanation of Snape
schedule August 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Draco has some problumes and is in dier need of help. The minstry of magic need a complet make over. I am so glad Severus and Harry finally got to gether. So what I'm saying is love the story keep it up.
person me
schedule August 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
been wondering whether you had abandoned the story - happy that is not the case! enjoyed both new chapters very much
person Megs
schedule August 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I nerdgasmed when I saw the update. Thought you'd appreciate that information lol

Ch 45 was great. The scene was hot, Severus' doubt was believable, and I'm just so damn excited whenever I think about this story!
person Darkless
schedule July 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I know I started reading this before, and I don't remember exactly when, but there is so much more of it...and leaving it where you did in chapter 44 is just evil!!

Harry and Severus are working through a lot of things, together and separately. It's fascinating to watch Severus' personality try to reestablish itself, understandably altered. No one can truly go back to what was lost, but one can find suitable replacements.

Also, as determined and brave as Severus prooved to be, it is no surprise that it is Harry that makes the first 'conscious' move toward intimacy, leap-before-you-think Gryffindor that he is.

I'm anticpating further story development (hopefully soon) and thank you for sharing obviously grand writing skills with readers that review and lurkers that don't. Great story! :)
person Narya
schedule July 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
nooooo

god, I just read the whole fic in like... 2 days XD, and I don't even have english as my first language.
Such a cliffhanger, though... 44 chapters waiting for that to happen and look the way it goes D:
I loved what I have read, though, I loved it enough as to review the fic, when I have never reviewed anything here. So congrats!
I'll be waiting for the next chapter.
Keep the good work and I hope lots of good things happen to you =)