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by emilywaters

schedule September 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
"he found that the arrow of his battered moral compass was firmly pointing in the direction of not dwelling on the memory of Severus' body pressed against his"

love this line... very vivid imagery. oh & still loving the whole story. Starting to think chapters must be too short though... i just don't want it to end!
person alina290
schedule September 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Poor Snape and Harry too. It was nice of Ginny to take Lili to see them.
Liz
schedule September 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Loved :D
person leanne
schedule September 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Minister Diggory NEEDS TO GO DOWN!!!! He's becoming a very evil person and should be taken out of the ministery Harry could have used his power as Hero Against Voldmort to end Diggory's career, he shouldn't have made himself get fired. That's not how you use your power. Diggory is becoming corrupt and far to controlling the people live in a kind of fear against speaking out and doing anything that might be concived as against Diggory and his new policies. It's terrible, Potter and his people need to start a movement to have that Idiot taken out of office. When is that going to happen? As far as I can see Diggory might Blame Severus for his son's death because Severus was a Professor and should have somehow prevented Cedric's death. I mean why else is he so set agains't Severus and the clearing of severus's name??

Good story, well done on some of the showing of the symptoms of what happens to raped and tortured victims. It's well done..
schedule September 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
gah I'm so curious about why he keeps getting sick! Is the ministry trying to become the new hierarchy and take control that way? are they testing it out on Snape first? gah ! I wanna know!
schedule September 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Couldn't stop reading today and disappointed it is incomplete, glad you didn't make Ginny evil. Hope you continue.

Also new to aft and wish I could me notified when this is updated.
person Tariray
schedule September 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic - love it....

really i am blown away by your talent - i started reading this lasy year and i am still drawn to it.

Well done!!!

I would love to mention you in my little blog - it isnt much but i just thought i should let you know.

THank you for your writing,
T
person QueenB
schedule September 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 48 What a harrowing chapter. Harry is going to be terrified when he finds Severus unconscious. I wonder how long it will take for him to find out what
person Minue
schedule September 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Somehow I have the feeling that Draco will die in this story. Nobody will miss him if he is captured, since he wanted to leave the country... More suspense regarding Severus - I hopy he will be allright! I look forward to your next update!
schedule September 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying watching Harry and Severus grow together. And how worried they are for each other and that Harry is still cognizant of the spell and it's potential effect on Sev's emotions. I hope they find a way to release him from it so it's never a concern. I love that line about perhaps it was better things were violent, so it didn't taint the gentle tenderness that Harry's showing him. Great update, Em.