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for Proof of Life

by emilywaters

schedule December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like the twist here as it could make sense that this is something he was looking for in Harry's eyes, not anything so entirely romantic as he "thought of Lily" in the books [as is implied], but something far simpler but less understanable. I'm really curious as to exactly what that spell does and how it works. Had Harry not come back, as we know he will, what would have happened to Severus? It is cool that it is probably another spell for Severus' potions book. ^^ Interesting so far. I love that warning. lol *protects Draco*
person kunitsu
schedule December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh love how you chaged and added things to that scene. I wonder what that spell does anyway. Cant wait for more
person Lionessmon
schedule December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this idea and it's great to know there is a new fic to get my teeth into when Ashes of Armageddon finishes. Post soon.
person Leentjef
schedule December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very very good beginning keep up the good work
and post sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon
bye bye
person Immersion
schedule December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please do continue! I can tell I'm going to like your style already =)
person Elphaba
schedule December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting! Very Very Interesting!
schedule December 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Heavy angst isn't my thing, some angst for the story-line is good as long as it leads to a resolution. I would never want Ginny killed off, but in a Snarry, she has to go somewhere and at this point she and Harry are not together, so... Hurt and heal is good, but hurt and heal with attraction and sex are better! :-)

What ever you decide to do of course I'll read it, I just may stop at some point with no ill will and of course nothing against your writing skills, I love them!