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December 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
holy effing shit! That's creepy as hell! Thank goodness Harry found Snape! I can't even imagine what that poor man has been through! My skin is practically humming with anticipation! I am so excited for the next chapter!
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December 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok my reaction after reading chapter 3 was "Ok wow"
Seven years is a very long time and now they finally find Severus. And his reaction to Harry was peculiar, I cant wait to see what happens next
Seven years is a very long time and now they finally find Severus. And his reaction to Harry was peculiar, I cant wait to see what happens next
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December 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
As well written as all your pieces, I cannot wait to read more. I hope this one is going to be as insightful and fulfilling as Ashes, though I can understand if it is not just as long! Beautiful work as always, I'll be watching closely for more chapters.
P.S You appear to share my vague dislike of Ginny, I wonder where that comes from?
P.S You appear to share my vague dislike of Ginny, I wonder where that comes from?
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December 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Still totally loving this story.
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December 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful!
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December 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely wonderful so far, I'm on the edge of my seat! I can't wait to find out what happened in the shack, what the spell, was, who took Severus, and what will happen next!
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December 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm not sure if this is proof enought to believe the truth, but I'm certain Snape wouldn't have normally have written Harry as the person who would receive his possessions upon his death. I mean, you didn't change that aspect in the last chapter. Snape completely believed Harry was going to die (not having any idea that he might come back). I'm guessing he's trying to recover, giving that note to Harry was a way of dispensing the secret to Harry and allowing him time to heal so no one hunts him. OR he had always had Harry on his will, even though he knew Harry would die, and did it as a way of further proof that Snape was always a spy. Although that last guess isn't something I'm really backing since it would seem to coldly caculating even for him (since he was distressed that he was sending Harry to his doom).
The fact that Harry didn't tell Hermione the spell is frustrating since I do really want to know what it does. I like that you had even Ron in tears over Snape's death. That is, believe it or not, the first time I can remember someone doing that. Most stories have him awkwardly and mostly still disliking Snape off to the side (Which is still a possibility with Ron's personality). Great frustrating chapter. lol I look forward to more.
The fact that Harry didn't tell Hermione the spell is frustrating since I do really want to know what it does. I like that you had even Ron in tears over Snape's death. That is, believe it or not, the first time I can remember someone doing that. Most stories have him awkwardly and mostly still disliking Snape off to the side (Which is still a possibility with Ron's personality). Great frustrating chapter. lol I look forward to more.
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December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Why do I get the feeling that the spell Harry used was a slave spell and the reason for the transfer of belogings is because Harry now owns Severus. I cant wait for Severus to show himself again
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December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for more! It's nice to see that there might have been a different reason behind those 'look at me' words...
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December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love it so far cant wait for the next chapter