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Damn! They really fucked Sev over didn't they? I like Marietta, I'm glad that Sev has an advocate...damn that Auror whoever he is...I can't believe Sev is being treated AND being restrained. That's some cold shit. I'm glad Harry is standing by him, but Sev's reactions to Harry are curious. I guess he's been longing for his touch? hmm. This is gonna be complicated. It doesn't seem like Harry even has the foggiest clue about what he's done, nor does Sev? I'm very interested to see what happens next.

This is a really good story, lol, seemed a bit short though but that was probably more because I'd gotten really into it and just wanted to read more. Love how you kept everyone in character though keeping a really unique plot and spin on things, a lot of fanfictions you read Snape would have broken down by now but he's still a lot like his usual self which is good. Look forward to more!

Damn I do hope the Minister will listen to Harry cause I got a feeling hell will break lose if Harry doesnt get his way. I cant wait to see when Harry discovers that he has a slave bond over Severus and everyone else's reactions

wow. Harry really does not know the extent of the spell he did does he? or am i going way off track with my assumptions here?

i am excited for the next chapter(s)!!!!

very very good keep going and post soon
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More, more more! Hell, that

omgosh
i got sooo teary at the ending of chapter 3!!
your are dreadful...
dreadfully fantastic =]
you better give him plenty of loving after this! lol =]

Goodness. I really wasn't expecting that time skip to occur so soon since you created that first chapter. You've done an excellent job setting up this newest scene for us. In the purest sense Harry just seems incomplete, unable to join Ginny. I found how you described his weird sense that the war would never be over amazing. It is sad that the world, with these terrorist attacks have still not let Harry alone, still expecting him to save the day.

And Snape. I hadn't considered it before, but I suppose it is possible he died for just a moment. I can't imagine the guilt that will not override Harry for leaving him defenseless in the Shack. I wonder if you'll go into an area of thought where Snape acts bitterly over the fact that Harry saved him. That last scene was crazy tense. I look forward to where you take this from here. I hope they found a way to redeem Snape even without the pensieve.

awesome story please contiuen with it. ( sorry my spelling is bad)

keep going and post soon
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