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this was very very good chapter
keep up the graet work and post soon
bye bye

Wow that was one hell of a chapter, learned a lot about Harry there.

Very good. i really like this story.

thanks for your story, i can't wait to read more of it !

While I can understand after all these years that Ginny would leave him, it is sad that she would leave him at this moment, when he's already at wits end. Thank goodness for Marietta then. Though it wasn't for Death Eaters, I suppose I should have figured Harry would spend money on everyone else. I'm rather angry at Diggory though. I could have forgiven him partially for being angry at Harry, but receiving money from Harry for his own campaign and then being nasty (and reinstituting the Dementor's Kiss) is horrible. I'm not sure whether to see Snape's suicide attempt as solely a way to escape from the pain, or if he was compelled in some manner to punish himself for causing Harry trouble (though it wasn't really trouble). Great job with these past two chapters. I look forward to the next.

I LOVE this Marietta chick....I vote to use her more in fan fic. lol. She's just what Harry and Sev needs. What a save...I knew you wouldn't kill Sevvie. So Harry blew his cash on everyone but himself. Awww, typical and DAFT. lol. Poor thing. He's so Harry, you write him well. And I love what he said about not being able to Dementor Kiss everything cruel away....Diggory sounds like George fucking Bush : ) And I like Marietta's response to Harry. Touche indeed. It's a good thing she has a soft spot for Sev or Harry would be in trouble. I wonder if he's about to find out the depth of the bond he made and what kind of impact it will have on how he interacts with Sev from now on and if he's going to go into Harry self-flagellation mode. lol. This is such an engaging read Em. Great update.

Amazing story. Keep going!

OMFG!! Emily!! Severus cannot kill himself. NO! OMFG>....I mean, this is totally understandable but the joy and desire that seems to stamp out any sense of fear or regret is just truly frightening. Damn, the jugular? wow.

Harry does seem a bit irresponsible and for the first time in a Snarry I don't hate Ginny, I understand where she's coming from. But Harry has to do what he has to do and I guess she does too. I kinda feel bad for Harry, the whole Aunt Petunia emotional abuse thing coming back and taunting him. I can so see him going there. And wow@ Severus like not being able to be comfortable around someone who means him well. He's totally fucked up and I'm very worried about whether he can ever get better, that is if he lives which I know he will because this is a f*cking Snarry! Right? AWESOME update...can't wait to see how he's going to come out of this!

AHHHHH!!!! Nuuuu! Snape cannot die! I love him too much! Please tell me Harry saves him??? (Of course Harry saves him!) Damn it, you're just way too good at writing--you suck me into your story plots, and I find myself checking your page twice a day in hopes of an update. (Of course, I realize that you can't update that much--you're not superhuman. Thank you for writing! :D

Well that seperation was a long time coming. Ah I just hope Harry will wake up to save him