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oh ma gawd. usually i do not go fully into my non quite english
but YESH
for gosh sake
YESH

i wonder what he will be looking for / if it will work? it probably will, i mean it IS snape we're talking about.... who is growing a beard [ just not right... now i aqcuire a photo of this.... photoshop time ^.^]

so pumped for the next chapter!!!

what happened to the food they were going to eat *head tilt*


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Wonderful idea! I hope it works, if these two could communicate even a little it would go such a long way. Great chapter!

And you dare stop just like this? How cruel! :-D
Thank you, though, for the update and for the whole fic. It

Really exciting chapter. waiting for more!

eeek!! best slave!snape fic ever!!! and i usually dont read these!!

soo great!!
please write more!

@Ch. 11. Ron and Hermione are so good for him...I'm glad they came over...Harry's really overwhelmed eh? I like their solution, but it's sucks that Calming Drought is a controlled substance...more of Diggory's silliness I'm sure. Go Hermione for breaking the rules when it's important to : ) Harry's in dangerous territory...wants to restore Snape but his touch is also addictive and reinforces the slavery spell, but I guess anything he does will do that anyway. Great chapter.

@Ch. 12. Whoa...that was intense...what a mess, and the fact that Harry had to run to the shower to finish himself off and couldn't shake the image of Severus giving him pleasure says a lot. Now I'm curious about where this may lead. I like the mention of a flicker of anger in Severus' eyes at the end...perhaps a little of the old Snape? I hope so...Really interesting chapter...very well done.

@Ch. 13. Awww....that was so sad, but sweet...bittersweet I guess they call it. I love your Ginny and that's REALLY amazing...I hate her character something fierce, so for you to make me love her really means you've put your foot in building her character. I'm almost sad they couldnt' work it out...but then it wouldn't be a Snarry would it? I really liked their conversation, and I hope they remain good friends...lol@Ginny calling Hermione a bitch...I can so see that. And yes, Marietta IS a female Snape, that's why I've been drawn to her character...Great chapter Em.

@Ch. 14. Whew...all caught up now...This is gripping stuff..I love the reconvening of the D.A. with the Slytherins in tow...lol. What Blaise said was true, and I'm ashamed to say that I enjoyed all of the bickering going on in the beginning as well as the Slytherins' shock at Harry's generosity. I think the rotation is a fab idea and I hope it works out...not sure if Snape is ready to do a Patronus...Harry needs to chill out...he always runs with something once he has his mind set...I hope he doesn't do anything to hurt or compromise Severus' safety.

Harry really is a moron in this story isn't he? I seem to remember a warning that he would be extremely naive, but that could have been another story I'm following... Anyway, I love the story except for wanting to kick Harry's butt! :-) No, seriously, I do love the story and know Harry will come along, I just hope he gets a clue before he kills Severus.

I think this is a Snarry story and so wonder about Harry's still overt connection to Ginny. I thought he may have some questions by now especially since he had some time with her?

Congratulations on the DA refiguring and trying to solve another problem! I'm glad the Slytherins are there and hope they see Severus' best interest at heart, at some point. I can't wait to see them (most of them probably) all fight for the same thing. And, yeah Marietta, love that you are redeeming her.