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@ch. 16. What a SWEET exchange between Harry and Severus at the end. That was so touching and authentic. I hope that Severus really internalizes how significant of a thing that was for Harry to say to him. I love your Luna. She's is so IC and funny and quirky and real. Awesome job with characterization there, and Harry was acting a bit bitchy wasn't he? I guess that's IC too. lol. My heart broke when they went through all of those old wands and Sev's magic still didn't work. Poor thing. and poor Marietta, that's no fair she's still being judged for something that's been over. This is indeed an unfair world you've painted. I'm loving every minute of it. Loved Harry's response to Sev's question about punishment, he's learning to balance the tight rope that Sev needs right now, and that shows growth for both of them. Great chapter, very insightful for all of the characters.

Wow I didnt expect that Marrieta would still be scorned for what she did when she was 15, damn. Harry and Severus made another improvement, I love that

Wonderful chapter.

OMG! I really love this chapter (16)!!!! It is beautiful and heartwarming. I hope Snape gets better soon... (not TOO soon though...) I love this story!

very very vey good chapter
keep up the fantastic work and post soon
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This story is simply magnificent. I can't wait til the next cheapter. Write more soon, pleeeeeese!

how sweet... want more... pleaaaaaaaaaazeeeeee

I'm growing to love this story more and more with each new chapter. Thank you very much for it.

very very good chapter keep u the good work and post soon
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This story just keeps me on my toes. Great update, keep it up