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for Proof of Life

by emilywaters

person anon
schedule March 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful.
I love the banter that Harry and Severus are managing. Luna is very perceptive. Ginny is never my central character of choice, but you have drawn her wonderfully, as a foil, as is Lily Eileen. It's all very interesting and affectionate, even as the story retains the uncertainty.
person Alesia
schedule March 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy that you updated! I check every night to see if you did--and today you did! I am very happy. Excellent chapter. I was glad to see Snape make a snappy comeback, and that Harry reacted positively. It just makes me giggle.
person 12blue12
schedule March 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
brilliant story so far, please update soon!
person SoftObsidian74
schedule February 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
@Ch. 19. I think I read this chapter before, but I wanted to re-read it again. it's really wonderful how you have him going through so many emotions as he tries to get a grip on where and when he is. Poor Sev. There was some undercurrent of romance when Harry stayed by his side. At least that's what I picked up. Go Harry for being persistent and damn Percy, hasn't he learned anything?
person SoftObsidian74
schedule February 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh shit, Lucius died? That was shocking! And Draco has been sick, just like Sev..what's up? I loved the Trio's reactions at the Manor, they were all perfectly IC considering their history with that place. Very well done. And aww@Harry taking Marietta out to dinner. She deserves it. The bond is very disturbing indeed. Thank goodness Harry has his best intentions in mind. lol. Poor McGonagall! Great chapter.
schedule February 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was a really good chapter. I like Marietta a lot. I think I would like to read about her with Luna, she defiantly seems very lonely. It's nice that she lives with her mom, and is not completely one her own. That story she told was sad, it sucked that the kid she worked to hard to save ended up the way he did. I like the way you are writing Ginny, and Lily is adorable. I've always liked Ginny, so even if I enjoy my Snarry I don't need her to be killed off quickly. It's nice that your really capturing her character, and that you haven't just made her the evil bitch. I'm very much looking forward to the next update.
person Ginnyvere
schedule February 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Did I ever review this story? I'm not sure, but I hope I did ^^
The last chapters were really nice :D I love to see Severus getting along ^^

I like the way you write. :) I'm never able to stop reading ^^ And you always find the right pace, it's never boring, never going on too fast.
*stares at lots of "never"s*
person kunitsu
schedule February 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
well a few part of that chapter was rather unexpected like that thing with Lee. I really am glad that Harry and Marietta are getting along better, I really feel like she will help those two more than they know
person Jamac
schedule February 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is the best Snarry i've read in a very long time, with what has so far been a masterful build-up. I am eagerly anticipating the next chapter.
person blank
schedule February 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*snicker* I love Luna. "If you won't, then I will." Heh.

Good Severus chapter. Liked it lots.