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@Ch. 21. AWWW, I'm LOVING the development of Marietta as a character. You never see her in fanfic and she was totally destroyed in the books, you're like totally redeeming her. I love her frankness and her spirit. She's really refreshing to read. Great writing there Em. Its really disturbing to think about the whole Dementor's Kiss thing...the explanation Marietta gave sounds spot on...really, what is the point? awful. And wow, now we find out Harry IS bi : ) Woo-hoo, let the games begin!

@Ch. 22. I really liked this chapter...mostly because of the depth of thought Sev expressed at the beginning and the humor at the end. Freedom for what is a such a good question. Life is as good as its ever been for him right now. He must be secretly terrified to be set free. I'm really glad Harry put some of that fear to rest and offered to keep him after he was cleared. I think he really needed that. I love how in character everyone is, and now that they're all there searching for the stone it feels sorta like old times but not, you know. I love that Sev is getting his snark back a little, even if its accidental. Harry checking in on him is so sweet. Luna's comment at the end was just priceless. This chapter really made smile, is bad that I kinda don't want them to find the stone? : )

Ch. 24. Awesome....a threesome pile, the one Ginny sarcastically threw out when this thing started. That was FUNNY! I love Ginny in this story, she's very likeable, much more so than in the books. I was like "yeah you go girl' when she told off Rosmerta. OK< yeah, Sev had a point about Draco doing the Unforgiveable but come on! he was a kid...and he's apologetic and trying to help Sev! Poor Draco..that must have felt awful. I love the whole gang coming together and making the best of a rough situation and using humor through it. Although I said I hope they wouldn't find the stone, I'm a bit worried about it as well. yay for Sev joking more. He and Harry seem to be building a genuine relationship.

@Ch. 25. Very interesting turn of events. I felt bad for Cho...I mean, yeah, it was a stupid mistake but it's hard to always be paranoid and strategic if you aren't use to being so. Poor thing..always crying still. LOL. Too bad they couldn't find the stone, but I really like how Hermione spoke up for Marietta when Ron tried to put her on the hot seat. Yay Hermione...would love to know Marietta's reaction to that. And its about time Sev starts realizing how much Harry cares for him. He's starting to get it I think....Luna is so...Luna. I'm a bit worried if the Ministry has the stone or knows about what they're doing what will they do with this information, or the stone....hmmm.Update soon, the plot is thickening nicely :)

Wow, totally loooove this story! Just caught up and like it plenty!

so short! that was nearly a teaser! ooooh I have such an impatient nature, I'm just desperate to read more. I hope you can update again soon!

I hope they find something soon, great update

His patronus is going to change into something to represent Harry.

I love this story...although this chapter is full of angst! haha! Were you angry while you were writing it? It seems you may have been!
I can't wait to see if they find the stone!
Please update again soon!

Wonderful. Love the dialog. Great to see Harry considering.