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for Proof of Life

by emilywaters

person Otis-Girl
schedule May 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic story!!! I'm enjoying it a great deal. There is something irresistible about your vulnerable Snape (normally I like him strong). Please update soon!!!
person Phoibe
schedule May 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hello Emily

I'm afraid I'm not good at writing insightful criticism so I'll just say I really like your fic,
plot,storytelling,character's interactions and dialogs all of them amazing.Chapter 22 Growing Pains is my favorite so far because you gave us Mari's background details ,your Marietta is becoming very dear for me right after Luna who keeps performing miracles with her usual emphatic abilities :))

I hope Severus could gain his freedom eventually more importantly , The Light Brigade could find a way to Ministry's crusade against all former Death Eaters even if some of them very much deserve it!

Anyway I'll keep following your work please update as soon as you'd be able to.Take care!
schedule April 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yay another chappie! ^_^ I hope Draco and Severus are able to talk, they both need some good ol Slytherin comfort.
person kunitsu
schedule April 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I dont really know what to say since I am kinda half asleep but I just had to read this update since I am hooked. I must say I am curious to see as to how Draco and Severus will talk to each other
schedule April 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ooo, I can't WAIT to see what Draco and Snape's interactions will be like. It's obvious Draco has been avoiding him. I loved their conversation over Firewhiskey. Needed to get that out for sure for things to move forward. So much for should have would haves! I'm glad they have each other now. I hope Snape's patronus returns. Aww@Harry wanking to Sev and waking up with wood. Somehow, I doubt Sev would have minded much.lol. Great update.
person anon
schedule April 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I forgot to mention that I adored this chapter. Quiet but full of forward direction.
person morganabythesea
schedule April 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Still loving it!
person anon
schedule April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So does this mean they will never get the stone? But things are going to turn at all right eventaully. As a matter of fact, it might be just sweet for this turn of events as the other, from a plot point of view.
person tuesdayafternoon
schedule April 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I haven't read fanfic in years, but curiosity got the best of me, and I'm so glad it's this story I picked. Your prose is at points thoughtful, sad, touching, and witty, and I love your characterizations. I can't wait to see how this all turns out. :)
schedule April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
@Ch. 21. Yay, Luna got Sev out of the house and working, and EATING...Major moves there. At first she was pissing me off but I'm glad to see she had a plan. How could I ever doubt her. LOL@her suggestion of dating Marietta...foreshadowing? Pisses me off that people are sneering at Sev, after all he's been through...bastards. So is Draco avoiding Sev or is he imagining things and its sorta sad he felt nothing about Lucius passing. I am glad he got to get his old things. yay for progress :)