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for Proof of Life

by emilywaters

person kunitsu
schedule July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Its nice to see how Harrys and Severus's relationship is evolving, I love how the pace is going right now.
schedule July 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*cuddles both of them* nuuu not more misunderstandings! Cuddle! Talk! Don't let bad things stay on your mind! You bot have serious communication issues!

And you! *Points at author* ^_^ thanks for the update, I can't get enough of this story and the updates just brighten my day! *huggles*
person kunitsu
schedule July 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well I surely didnt expect that but it was great. I really love how the old Severus is coming back
person Rin
schedule July 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this night conversation))) So... sweet and promising)))) Thank you very much!
person Alexness
schedule July 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely amazing. one of the few fanfics I have read that I am able to take seriously.
schedule July 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love the update -and how Severus' sarcasm is trickling back.

From my POV though i'd rather like it if Harry *did* turn up the knight in shining underwear yet again, but there we go.

Can't wait for the next x
schedule July 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just love Luna more and more with each and every chapter. ^_^ The way she speaks to people really makes them realize when they are taking themselves too seriously I know the true revelation that the relationship is truly over with Ginny is very hard for Harry to accept, but at least they are still on good terms and not at each other''s throats. I also think that without trying to get back what he can no longer have, being a constant distraction, Harry might finally be able to truly see what he DOES have and be able to become closer and more help to the person who truly does want and need him.

This really is a lovely story, I can't wait to read another chapter! Thanks for the update! ^_^
person Katherine
schedule July 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I found this really easy to follow and a pleasure to read. I couldn't take my eyes away the whole time.
Keep up the good work hope the next chapter is up soon, would you email me an alert when it is up?
schedule July 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh I just love it. *sniffle*

Poor Harry. But I'm not going to lie and say i'm actually disappointed, because I'm not.

And, I love that Severus grew his hair back.

Can't wait for more! x
person Rin
schedule July 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you very much for this chapter! I hope that Harry left alone soon will love Severus too ))) But I feel sorry for Harry neverless(( Lily's picture is some sort of a sign..

I didn't mention I love your Luna - she is so wise and mysterious!