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for Proof of Life

by emilywaters

schedule August 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You have one of the best portrayals of Luna Lovegod I have ever seen. Bravo on the chapter can't wait for the next one.
KP
schedule August 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I wonder when Harry will finally realize that the feelings he has for Sev'rus are 'those' feelings... And not friendly feelings.
Good chapter as always.
Can't wait for the next one!
KP
schedule August 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Severus reactions and thought process is totally in character and believable. My heart hurts for him, and Harry who has to figure out how to balance his own emotions and inclinations against what's best for Snape while he lashes out. Very complex writing you're doing and fabulously so. I LOVED Hermione sharing her story with Sev as a way to helping him put things in perspective. Great update, Em.
schedule August 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Emotional upheavals are never easy, but I think Harry has learned that the boundaries are going to be changing from day to day for awhile. He just needs to be patient, and I know it isn't his strong suit, but maybe he'll be able to handle it better now.
person kunitsu
schedule August 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I agree with what Harry said about winning the war etc. Love the great update
schedule August 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for the moment Severus finally does let Harry in and lets himself properly revel in the touches. As this is a Snape/Harry i'm assuming that's coming, right? ;)

Harry has a very poignant point about the war.
schedule July 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aww... Huh, I actually don't know what to say. But that was so sweet!
schedule July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*gleefully bounces up and down.* SQUUUUUUUUUUUUEEEEEEEEEE! ^_^ Small breakthrough but it's such an important one! Hooray! Oh I'm so happy for both of them, happy happy happy! I hope it can continue to get better like this! ^_^
schedule July 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh lordie how I love your writing.
I am so glad Ginny is gone and gone with me liking her.
Your good. Very good.
Can't wait till the next chapter.
KP
schedule July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love the update. Poor Severus though. But Harry is above and beyond in this fic, i'm loving him. So protective.

Can't wait for more! x