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by emilywaters

person QueenB
schedule August 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 2 Sleeping in Snape's bed...with Hermione. All right, it's going to be tough fantasizing about that. But I can try. ;P
person QueenB
schedule August 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 3 This is a harrowing chapter and I sense there's worse to come. I'm looking forward and dreading it. I can't leave a longer review; my time at the computer is almost up. But I'll be following this story.
schedule August 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love how you are so thorough and consequent. It makes so much sense that Diggory would try to punish Neville for his connection to Severus.
Also, I like the idea of business partners a lot :D
schedule August 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe this but I actually started crying at the end. Harry looking Ginny and being worried about looking his family that went with it really hit home. That is what happened with me when I dated and broke up with my best friend since seventh grade. I lost him and his horde and it was aweful.
So you should feel special you have the power to make me cry which very few authors do.
Update soon,
Kp.
schedule August 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oooh does Neville's heave-ho have anything to do with Severus? I find the idea of him and Severus working together immensely amusing though, but something that could work out very well if they want it to.

Lovely update, it's nice to see Harry still being welcomed by the Weasleys, even if Percy is a twunt.

xx
schedule August 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Superbly beautiful. I read both of your novel length stories tonight and even though WIPs make me edgy, I just had to read this. And I love it. The first few chapters tore at my heart. Glad to see Severus being more of his snarky, superb self now. But he still has so many wounds and fears that are festering... I just want to hug him. Harry is doing very well. (My heart went out when Ginny told him about the divorce)

Please update soon!!!
person tar
schedule August 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just love this story, each time I see it's been updated i swear i do a little jig.
person goldsnitcher
schedule August 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Severus' depression is somehow bothers me ((( I could guess that it is due the lack of Harry's touching((( And I feel the storm's coming(((( I think it's Diggory's plot to use Severus as a bait((((((((

Thank you very much! I am waiting for what comes next! Your story is just beatiful!
schedule August 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
^_^ luna just gains more awesomeness with every single chapter. I adore her in this story. and Diggory is making my fingers itch to choke his neck. ooooh that man is beginning to not make me care that his son was an incredibly decent fellow. I want Harry to be able to find the resurrection stone, bring back Cedric and have him haunt his father until the man goes mad.
person kunitsu
schedule August 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great update, love it. Sorry I cant seem to come up with better reviews but I really am enjoying this