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for Proof of Life

by emilywaters

person Shindou
schedule September 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's just beautiful. Tender and gentle. I feel sorry for Severus but as Nevill so clearly shown Harry this whole situation would have been much much worse. I hope for Severus to recover somehow. And hope that he wasn't mistaken about Harry's feelings.


Thank you very much!
schedule September 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have a sneaking suspicion that Severus was referring to Harry's eyes right then, and don't worry severus, you weren't mistaken, those ARE his feelings, even if he hasn't realized it yet. ^_^ thanks for the update! they make my day!
person QueenB
schedule September 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 39 I
person Word_Slave
schedule September 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YAY another chapter!!! I was just thinking about this the other day. And I love how you are getting them together slowly... although I would like to bash their heads in a bit. or have them have something cause a ragaing stream of lust... but that's only my thoughts. And I love your work. Thanks@
schedule September 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like how this has progressed. It is too bad that the stone seems to be a dead end for now, until they can be sure that it was the Ministry who took it (or if it really was just lost), but I'm glad that Snape has gotten some of his old bite back. I'm a bit disappointed in Draco, as much as I am sorry for him that his father died, because of the way he sees and treats Severus. Looking forward to the next chapter.
person goldsnitcher
schedule September 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I feel so sorry for broken Severus((( I wish him to become himself again. Maybe it'll take some time.. It's just noble of him not stop fighting(( But my heart is bleeding seeing him fighting his feelings for Harry.

Thank you very much! Sorry for such a lousy feedback, I'll keep trying))
schedule September 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hooray for another chapter! Yes Snape needs to be completely self-indulgent for awhile methinks, and that includes indulging himself on sleeping with Harry. ^_^
schedule September 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
..... I echo Harry's sentiment completely, as I know what, sorry -who!, Severus feels like doing ;)

Watching him struggle so much is really painful, it's very succinctly depicted. I adore your fic! x
person QueenB
schedule September 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 38 I think Severus
schedule September 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay, update! And they are getting closer to one another. The wanting to touch and be next to them. I am soo excited. Update soon!
KP