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for Proof of Life

by emilywaters

person Josie
schedule February 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Whoa an update! I'm glad to see Severus and Marietta were successful with their task. I really enjoy the way your characters come across, very lifelike. Well done, hope to see more soon!
person Zanzi
schedule February 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oooo! I've been waiting for this chapter for soooo long, I'm so glad it's finally here! I really, really love this story, and it's great how their relationship is progressing now. I can't wait to see who'll make the next move!
schedule February 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Mmmm another good chapter, how lovely. but that Vector Magic thing has me worried. I hope you can write more soon!
person catnona
schedule February 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Welcome back! Thank you for the chapter, I must confess I've missed the updates, however following you LJ has kept me nice and patient. Keep it going as you are a brilliant writer and one of my favourites
person QueenB
schedule February 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 43 How thrilling it is to have a new chapter after so long! While I
person Iralima
schedule February 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMIGOD you updated!!! You made my day! (and week, month, year of 2010, etc...)

I've been checking this story pretty much every day since your last update. It's so amazing to finally see the bar scroll down just a little lower on the chapter list :D

Aaaaaand the story is moving in a *very* delicious direction. Although the stuff about Diggory researching slave magic scares me. Harry and Severus taking even a single step forward to the previous chapters' 10 leaps back is a wonderful sight. It's nice that although the main plot is of course still there in the background, you chose to focus more on the budding relationship this time, thank you!
person IvvyMoon
schedule February 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I wish Harry would realize how much Severus needs from him. I'm so glad you updated this! Thank you for posting!
person puck
schedule February 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
YAY! You're back! I did a dance when i saw there was a new chapter! Excellent, as usual! Hang in there!
person Josie
schedule February 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
For the love of god please don't leave this story hanging! I love your style of writing, that youre not afraid to take time to say what is needed. I'm just going to kwwp hanging in there for an update; just don't abandon it please!
person hokuto92
schedule January 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please Continue soon!! It's great so far. Can't wait to see what happens next