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for No Looking Back

by nastygrl

schedule December 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*squee!* I love this chapter! You've revealed Draco in a wonderful light (I thank you!), and that he has a solid relationship with his father. Though I wondered if Draco might provide a few more clues to what happened to Lucius, I'm guessing he does not know about it. He did provide some idea of something else afoot when he mentioned the kidnapping attempt. And what of this cottage and it's accompanying smell? Will we get to visit said cottage? I love how Hermione just 'arrived', just as it was normal and an everyday occurrence. I snickered at Lucius noticing her legs. This is getting so very good!
schedule December 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whaaaaaaaaaat!!!!!!?? I want mre come on, that's not fair, I like it a lot and well I hope for the update soon

Happy Holidays
take care
Love
Lola
person Anon
schedule December 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person maddie50
schedule December 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am very curious to see what happens next.
person Ithilwen
schedule December 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I do wonder what's happened to him? Why can't he remember the last 5 years.. And he's not changed at all? I would say he really has! He doesn't know what's happened to him!

Oh more please soon.
schedule December 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! This is so intriguing!

Is Severus alive? What as happened to Lucius? Was he really obliviated?

Great start ,with a lot of mystery! I am loving it already!!
schedule December 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just... wow! I'm loving this build up! I'm so damn curious - I want to know more! What happens when he finds Draco? How will Draco behave? Is Severus alive or dead in your story? You've thrown us (and Lucius!) into this unknown world and I can't wait to watch it unravel!

So very excellent! I LOVE this!!
person Ithilwen
schedule December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting!! He's got some sort of memory loss?
Please go on!
schedule December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What a wonderful mystery you are weaving with this. Such an intriguing beginning, and you know I love it. TGhe little details that are making Lucius crazed are drawn so beautifully. I'm dying to see where this goes, yuou are off to a great start!
person Voracious reader
schedule December 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This looks promising! I've bookmarked it and will wait eagerly for your updates. And I like Gobbert already.