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for No Looking Back

by nastygrl

person Rosamund
schedule January 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME update...lovin' this story...so intriguing!
person birdie
schedule January 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hi! i just want to say that i'm really enjoying the direction where you're taking this story. as much as i love and adore lemons, i always appreciate and respect an author who can weave a decent plot, and it seems like this is shaping up to be quite the plot-driven tale. looking forward to the next chapter!
person Anon
schedule January 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule January 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lovely! Too short! I wanted to know so much more! LOL!

And what a way to end it! I want to know, too! GAH!! :)

Some of my favorite parts were, "The last time I was led by the hand, I was a toddler. To have her do so now is inconceivable; yet here I am, docilely following behind like some boy in short pants." ROFL! That was so funny!

And, "In the hour since I
person Sampdoria
schedule January 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great update! A few bits more to the puzzle, but still a lot missing. The most important being who obliviated Lucius and why? Narcissa comes to mind, she doesn't come across as a woman who cares for losing her position as Lady Malfoy to anyone, lest atleast Hermione. I must say I really look forward to read more!
person Rosamund
schedule January 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story, just one question: lucius said he hadn't had an affair (just enjoyed company) but now contradicts that...unless you meant he never had a woman more than for one night? Well, either way...love this story. Need to alert it at the other site, which I already noticed its up there, too :)
schedule January 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I love the changes you made, the little additions in here are simply wonderful. You really have captured a befuddled Lucius (that's an oxymoron, isn't it? LOL!) so well, and I love the chemistry and sexual tension between them. And that kiss, yum! Makes my knees weak. I can only imagine what will happen when these two really get down to it. I'm anxiously awaiting that, for real! ;)

Bravo! This is a fantastic update.
person The Bloody Baroness
schedule January 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love your stories and find myself anxiously waiting for another update!!!!!!!
schedule December 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love it!!!!! I can hardly wait for the next update! :-)
person Ithilwen
schedule December 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, what has happened to him.. Who possibly obliviated the 5 last year of his life??
And Hermione is surprisingly at home in his study..
hmmm.. Yes, we need to talk!!