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Oh, freaking, MY. What a brilliant chapter! Loves it! The part where he was reading his journals was quite amusing, how he went from loathing her to noticing how that jumper looked on her. A good bit of humor!

And holy hell, that scene in the bedroom was magnificent. Sheer perfection! You wrote that scene so amazingly well. I was squirming in my chair to be sure. The sexual tension was off the hook and I think that scene is your best writing to date!

Keep up the great work!

I am anxious to see what happens next!! Keep up the great work!

That was so sensual and so beautiful...he wants answers, he wants her and he's so lost but also found when she's in his arms. Gorgeous.

Holy Cow! Chapter 5 was H.O.T.! I am really intrigued by the whole premise of this fic so far. What exactly is the full nation of Lucius and Hermione's relationship? And Hermione and Severus? Even Severus and Lucius? What is Narcissa up to? What has happened to make Lucius lose all memory of the past five years? So many questions! I look forward to finding out the answers to my questions. Oh and please feel free to give us all the delicious Lucius-lemons that you want to. :-P

Okay, now I am dying to know what is in those damn journals! I am looking forward to an update....please!!!

Another good chapter! So he meets with Severus, who still has some secrets up his sleeve, I suspect! Cannot wait until Lucius reads his journals - I think a lot will be revealed there!

Is something being engineered, here? Is Narcissa trying to build up the Malfoy fortune so she can take a bunch when she leaves him?

This web you are weaving is getting so good! Excellent!!!

Great chapter!

@5. I am so very curious about the dynamic between Hermione and Lucius. They were lovers in the past? Almost lovers? Why the hell is he still married to social schemer? And where IS Severus, and what secrets will be revealed upon his return? And what is Hermione hiding from Lucius? Why IS her reaction to Severus so curious?

Was Lucius' dream really a dream? Damn! That was SMOKING. Was it, perhaps, a memory returned to him?

Will say that bit at the end, with him 'tasting' did not remotely appeal to me. Bleh. But that dream was off the hook!

This was a great chapter! I know I'm always asking, but more, please! I can't wait to find out where you're going!

I love this chapter. More and more each time I read it. He has some answers here, sort of, but not enough, and I love the confusion and unease that consumes him. But I love his reaction to Hermione - he really doesn't quite know how to deal with her, even as he knows she is worthy of his trust and desire. And oh, that smut is just so hot! I just love how he was taken by surprise, I love him caught off-guard no matter what, since he's always such a cool customer. What a delicious way to do it!

Great chapter, dear. Wonderful!

Great story. Read it after seeing it recommended at The New Library. The writing is really good and the plot is so interesting. I can't wait to see what happens next. Could you e-mail when you update? sherrikillamwilliams@yahoo.com
Thanks!