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December 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! You portrayed Lucius as a decent human without compromising the deatheater beneath. You managed to put together a very original story with characters mostly in the norm. Very enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing. p
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November 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Interesting inter-personal-relationships between the main players. It was not even far fetched. Good job
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May 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
A thrilling and sexy story, thank you very much!
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March 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great writing! I think you did very well Lucius memory loss and how he handled the ordeal. I really enjoyed your story!
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March 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've always believed Narcissa to be an awful, conniving piece of baggage. Your demonstration of Lucius' experience was quite clever. The tone of each chapter changed as Lucius began to grasp understanding of his situation; well done. Great LM/HG story. Wonderfully ordered intrigue. Cheers!
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March 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm in love with this story. You ended it perfectly!!! I loved Lucius, how everything played out, how Severus played his part as the trusted friend, how Narcissa laid it all out and lost it all (as well she should!)... and Draco! Perfectly written. I loved the ending so much! You did a FABULOUS job with this and I loves you for it!
RAWR!!!!!
RAWR!!!!!
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March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh darling what a wonderful ending. In fact, the whole thing played out like a movie or series. I love it. And I really could also most see a straightback Lucius turing on a ranting Narcissa to head back to the woman he loves. I really loved it being from his POV as well.
By the way I'm gonna take one up with Scoffy - I love porn Lucius, I fail to see why that would be a bad thing. Thanks again Dari love!
By the way I'm gonna take one up with Scoffy - I love porn Lucius, I fail to see why that would be a bad thing. Thanks again Dari love!
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March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay! What a fantastic story. I must admit to hoping for an epilogue, I just can't seem to get enough of this story.
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March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Brava, my dear. Brava!!