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for At the Altar

by Ms_Figg

person londonlupin
schedule December 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
okay, that was a nice one shot but girl, you need to finish the next lemony chapter o f Yuleride that we are all waiting for...
person Ms_Figg
schedule December 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol. I just posted a 2500 chapter this morning girl. :) I'm doing what I can. Sometimes things pop in my head and I have to write them out. I also have some income-generating articles I need to do. But I'll get to Yuleride, don't worry.
person ismene5
schedule December 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, oh, oh, he's MY HERO!!!!!!

Very nice short story, Ms_Figg.
schedule December 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL!!! You weird and wonderful woman!! I'd love to be in your head for a day!
Loved it as usual!

P.S. Any progress on through th looking glass?
schedule December 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very nice..........now get to work on the savior story!!! im biteing a hole in my chair on that one. wishing you well,.......
person Voracious reader
schedule December 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very dramatic! Though, I'd be a little curious as to where else you might take this. Still, an opening like that would be hard to follow.
person Ms_Figg
schedule December 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Voracious Reader: Hey girl. :) I think that this particular story, if it were pursued would be retrospective in the telling, that it, it would shift to two years earlier and Snape's "death." I think that I would do something like Snape leaving a false body in the Shrieking Shack, something like the Weasley's did to make others believe Ron was very sick. I forget what creature they used. I know, it sounds lame but I'd fix it up a bit. lololol. Of course, Hermione would discover he was still alive and be sworn to secrecy and they would be working on something together, and fall in love in the process. It wouldn't be a sex-filled story but rather angsty, with Snape telling Hernmione to stay with her safe little boyfriend and not to play with fire, because it would consume her, things of that nature. And when she finally decides to tie the knot, Snape realizes he's letting go of the one woman who ever truly loved him, young or not and decides he's not going to be a fool. He chased one woman who didn't love him, nearly died for her memory, then turns away a woman who does love him, thus being a fool again. Once would be enough. So . . . there we go. What the story would have been in a nutshell. lol.