rate_review Reviews

What a sick puppy Mulciber is. I hate seeing SS play such a big part in the assault of a young girl, even though I know that the purpose of the story is to paint him badly so that there is ample reason for Lily to want nothing to do with him. Still, interesting (even if disturbing) so far. p

Duh! How could Snape say that Dumbledore would look in Mulciber's mind and still not know that the headmaster indeed knew that Snape was in on it. And he would have seen what part he played. Wonder if he will be called in to pay for his part. p

Great story. Hopefully there's going to be some Lily/Snape moments of adult nature!

hey I really like this one and I am kind of surprised that I do cause usually it turns me off when males are on the receiving end of punishments but somehow here I like it.

I think it is great you based your story on something that really happened and that we just don't know much about. Makes it a whole lot more significant and exciting. Personally I don't think it was attempted rape cause that is just a little too extreme in that context. They would have been expelled for that for sure. But I agree that it likely had to do with the Imperious and that it was something sexual considering the way boys are that age and that the victim was a girl. That surely was no coincidence. Perhaps he wanted to make her undress in public or perhaps he did want her to perform something sexual but I just don't think it was something as extreme as her letting him fuck her from behind. I just don't think Snape would have described that as "a laugh" to an outsider. But then again I really enjoy that you chose that as it's nice to read (which I know sounds VERY wrong)

Personally I also don't think that Dumbledore is someone who would ever resort to physically punishing a student. But again I am glad you made him cause I enjoyed that scene! I really wanted Snape to get caned and please feel honoured that you are the first writer archiving this with me, lol.
When he decided to lie I was just like "you smug little twat! You need some pain, man!" hehe. And also, even though I personally don't think Dumbledore believes in physical punishment I feel like you wrote him in character and it still made sense and was believable. Which is great!

Last but not least just a little thing, which is going to sound totally annoying but living in Scotland for 6 years I can not keep this to myself. It is true that we do not get proper summer ever but April is apparently the most sunny and most dry month in the year in the Highlands. Just kind of funny since in your story it says it always rains in April. But please don't be annoyed with me, I know it really doesn't matter. I just could not keep this to myself being exposed to our weather all year around. Well if you ever consider a holiday in Scotland, -come in April :)

Thanks for this story!

I just discovered this story and it's... exiting. Please continue. And don't get too... you know. Gross. If you keep within the limit of a plot allowing one to eat afterwards, I'd like it.

To llyoung:

Thanks. I forgot to reply earlier. If you ever do go through my other stories, please let me know in a review. And I hope you continue to enjoy this one ;)

Interesting story and I hope you continue. I also plan on reading your other stories when I get the chance. Thanks for writing.