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by iluvmysato

schedule April 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Haha, if it's really a Molly, I'm sorry for poor Sev :D I like Theora, too. How about an old British name for a boy? Something like AEthelrad or Aelfric?
schedule April 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oh, or how about Beowulf? :>
person b
schedule April 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
quite a few time in this chapter you state that 'roger' has said something or referred to roger as an actual person in the room, when I am sure you meant to write james in its place.
schedule April 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
good chapter! i look forward to more!
schedule April 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!! Severus in a towel and wet before Harry :D Awesome! And the brothers are so sorry. Loved it
schedule April 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow, I'm positively surprised! I didn't believe that was in Severus! Glad that he did, though. He seems to get better with the kids :D
person Dalou28
schedule April 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hello,

I love the moment between Severus, Albus and James !!!
Thank you

Severussement v
schedule April 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
awww...good chapter :) i look forward to more :)
person JC Black
schedule April 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What a sweet chapter so good.The boys with Severus was great and now maybe Harry can see what right in front of him.AL going to be a great help to Severus in coming chapter I bet. What will be Ron,Heriomie and Molly say about the baby? TIL next update....
person hairsprayX12
schedule April 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is so good. It makes my day whenever y'all post. It is one of the most interesting fics I've read. Thank you for sharing. Truly wonderful.