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for Scarred Souls

by iluvmysato

person morganabythesea
schedule November 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Dracula's Demise, Let's play a game called: Attack the Bat, Bat Attack, Oust the Invader, Silence Snape, ... :-)

Great story! Oh yes, bats do have claws.
schedule October 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Hopefully Severus can get the boys on side with soon though i can see Lily probably warming up to him quicker (the innocence of children...)

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person QueenB
schedule October 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 8 Snape has SUCH a way with children. Given this awful beginning, he shouldn
schedule October 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well I must say I am hooked on this story. I have a bit of trouble believing the way the kids talk sometimes. It feels less like children of the age of 6 are talking and more like someone with a well devolpted vocabulary is writing kids talking, which is the case I know lol. But this story line is amazingly inventive! I've never read a fanfic like this for happy potter before. And I'm DIEING to see how it will continue :)
schedule October 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loooved!
schedule October 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yes, i got it and hope to the next chapter in my inbox when it's done see you lsater and there is nothing wrong with your writing so why the beta?
person Winry
schedule October 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story and can't wait for more to come!
schedule October 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
no, and I wold love to be your beta!!!!!!!!!

love the story!
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person QueenB
schedule October 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 7
person QueenB
schedule October 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 7 I know what the boys could do! They could perform all sorts of pranks on Snape! Turning his skin odd colors, causing his hair to fall out, mixing up his potions ingredients, causing his cauldron to run around the room so that he