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Gods....Snape is just so so so ....I caint even think of a proper name for him....my God you've done a great job thus far... please keep up the awesome work.

lmao! The image of a cauldron with 2 feet running around spewing insults at snape is one of the most funny images I've had in my head for a while. Why cant snape understand he must use finess and seduction to get what he wants. I cant wait to see if he figures out this concept next chappy. update soon please!

Oh oh... That went totally by Snape... He just cannot be nice for once...
Excited about the next chapters :D

I love this story! I'm a very bad reviewer, though, sorry about that! I can't read text on the screen for long, because I work in front of a computer all day as it is, so I usually print the stories I want to read, and then I forget to review the next day... bad me! Aaaaanyway, love Snape, love Harry, and adore the kids... I would have killed them by now, but... well.. ;) WHat a HORRIBLE spell to put on someone! Poos SNape! Okay, so he's no angel, but... well... the pink hair was bad enough! ;)

Loved the updates! Excited about more :D

I can't wait to see his reaction to finding out the only thing keeping him out of Grimmauld is the consumation of the bond. I wonder how Severus is going to approach Harry about that? Perhaps Harry could just grant him entry with the sex thing. should be very amusing.

YAY!!! please update soon I must see what happens to poor sniviling snape. I want to know when they'll "consumate" the mating. so many questions and not that many answers. more please!

WOW! I wasn't sure at first if I would like this story or not but now I find myself "hooked". I like the give and take between Harry, Sev and the Boys. I love the fact that the kids aren't backing down. They aren't mean kids just determined to protect the family. :)

Hum... I was kind of enjoying the story more at the beginning, but the talking heads thing has just been drug on, and on... and on. It's really dragging the story down because there is no forward movement because there's the Snape, being very angry over these talking heads, who aren't really doing anything to change his mind about anything, just tormenting him. I don't see the point of them, at all, actually, an I think I could have accepted them for a chapter or something, but this "dragging out" is just making the story increasingly boring for me. I mean, if you were moving the story forward in other ways, it would be fine, but it seems like the heads are creating a plot hurdle that keeps it stagnant. Would really, really appreciate it if you could move things forward, even an inch or two, in the next chapter.

Thanks for the update =).

It is more angsty than I expected but really good. I'll go back to reading. Just wanted to tell you that you're doing a great job.