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March 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hello,
so cute ! I love !
Thank you !
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so cute ! I love !
Thank you !
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March 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay, yay, yay!! !Go Severus, you're on the right track, somehow! btw: I want a pet like Lily's :D
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March 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey, some real progress! Glad Severus is finally cluing in to how he can find a place in Harry's life.
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March 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
PLZ CONTINUE! im quite into this story... i wonder if there is anything wrong with the potion snape is taking.. hmmm
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March 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hello,
so nice chapter ! I wish to see Severus in the next.
Thank you !
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so nice chapter ! I wish to see Severus in the next.
Thank you !
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March 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I loved this chapter as well :D
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March 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Like the story just 2 things. 1) Are the twins (James mainly) supposed to remind everyone of Dudley? With Harry having Petunia's parenting style? 2) Harry said he was going to stop being nice. Was Harry ever actually nice to Snape?
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March 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really Love this story I hope to see more added to this story when you both can I really enjoy it. Keep up the great work you two!
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March 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hello,
so good ! I want to see again Severus with Harry !
Thank you !
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so good ! I want to see again Severus with Harry !
Thank you !
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March 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It's a good idea, but they're really quite out of character. Kudos for unique story idea though. You just need some character development, maybe a review to try to get their characters closer to those at the end of the book.