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for Hallelujah - A Christmas Story

by StarKneazle

schedule December 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow-this chapter's even better than the first one. Yay for fast updates!
Hugs-
Daisy
schedule December 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I would like to take a moment to say: No man deserves the woman that he has. But Lucius needs her...she is just stubborn and wicked!

Joking....

Well, I love this. It is so sweet! *pouts* I can't wait for the next chapter.
person ginnyginny
schedule December 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i think this story has a lot of potential, and i look forward to seeing where it goes next. i would certainly love to see more of the history with hermione and lucius, and how his depression and drinking pushed hermione away...
person Gertie
schedule December 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I agree- it really is a lovely story and I can't wait to see where it goes. Please keep updating.
schedule December 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A very well written and captivating first chapter, I am really looking forward to read more!!!
schedule December 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it. So sad and sweet. Poor Lucius. He needs her to stop being stubborn. He is a sad and changed Lucius.

I need more. I hope you weren't thinking of stopping there. That would be a crime. I would cry!
person Ithilwen
schedule December 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh this was so sad!! What happened to Draco?

But as sad as it was, almost made me cry, noone should be alone on christmas!

Please write more.. Christmas is supposed to be a time for joy with your loved ones!
schedule December 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm already captivated-can't wait to read more! (BTW, "Hallalujah" was written by Leonard Cohen. Great songwriter, not so great singer: which is why his songs are usually covered by others.) Thanks for a great story!
Hugs-
Daisy