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by vbruce

schedule July 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay you updated! I'm so glad...even though it was short :D I've been keeping up with this story since the beginning...I'm kinda bad about reviewing though...sorry! I definately like this one though and I can't wait to see what happens next!
schedule July 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! Lucius is still held in that awful cave in chains, and his friends are navigating dangerous and treacherous waters through deadly obstacles! We don't even find out how Lucius is doing now. He might be dead as far as I know. After all, he has been in there for quite a while now. *sobs* *cries* *desperate pleas for Lucius' safety*

:)

Your story is awesome. I love every minute I spend reading it. You keep the readers in breathless suspense and anticipation of the worst. Will Lucius' friends get to him unscathed? Will he survive his captivity in the hands of a mad sadistic serial killer? Sure this is not looking good. But this is fiction, so I have some hopes.

:)

Your work is much appreciated. thank you!
schedule July 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful chapter! Love the way Hermione took Harry to task about Lucius.
schedule July 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
(Blushing) you're welcome. Just how does Draco know where the mooring is, or how slippery the cave interior gets? To quote certain space pirate: 'I have a bad feeling about this!' Make Dobby hurry up with those keys. By the by, where's Angus and Severus? And that blond psycho we love to hate? They should have brought Bill Weasley, a serious curse breaker would come in handy about now.
person Tazzy
schedule July 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*grins* You can't get rid of some of us that easily, Darling. I can't speak for others, but I'm enjoying every second of this story.

((and the "safety words" this time are The refusals. Think it knows something we don't?))
schedule July 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OK, so I have just read all 59 chapters. Anyway I just wanted to say that I LOVE this! I have a few ideas about who has been helping Liren. Narcissa seems to fit the profile but like I said it is only an idea. Keep updating so I can keep reading!!!
schedule July 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh no, Lucius is in shackles held by his evil villain twin! Fortunately he is not alone, but his house elf friends are there to keep him company, and his human friends and family are already on their way. I just hope Hermione and company will not get killed by the wards of the cave.....

This is such a wonderful story! It has everything you can wish for: an evil villain whose tortured past would drive every person insane, his love who is the wife of his captive, his captive who is usually a villain but has evolved into a better person and is now something like a hero, the hero's love who is purely good, ghosts, elves, police investigators, lots of other people, plus ... an abundance of love!

The story is innovative, well written, and conveys emotions and happenings well.
A Big Thank You! :)
schedule July 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I do so love the fact that your mind has more twists than a DNA chain. Your house elves utterly rock, your ghosts are snarkily brilliant no matter what era they are from, and your villians are vicious and well-rounded. Abjectly awaiting the next installment! (I apologize for excessive use of exclamation points, but your story has that effect on me.)
person Tazzy
schedule June 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oooh! one st of madness over the other? How intriguing!

*grins and now Mione rides to the rescue and damn the one who gets in her way!
schedule June 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aye, an it's a proper sort of celt tha' understands the need for family a'time like this'n. LOL, couldn't resist. I like Angus; practical sort of fellow, isn't he? I did note a certain lack of gendered pronouns in there. I can hardly wait to see what's in the caves as the rescue party makes their way in. As always, a lovely cliffie, Darke.