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for Harvest Moon

by vbruce

schedule December 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm sending you the bill for my manicurist, since she's going to have to repair the damage I'm doing to my nails, thanks very much! Plot twists with the flexibility of a Yoga master, damn it! More, please!
schedule December 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very clever story, please keep it up :) five golden stars for you ^_^
schedule December 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I feel like I am reading/watching a Harry Potter version of CSI....

EXCELLENT!!!

I look forward to future chapters....
person Drea1256
schedule December 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe. I so think I'm right about who the murder is. I was wondering about it many chapters ago. Great job at leaving things just enough hidden so that there were questions about the true identity. I went back and forth several times(I don't want to say anything out right so I don't ruin it for anyone). I could be wrong though and it be someone totally different. (which would be fun too). I really like stories/shows/movies where I can constantly guess what's really going on. Well done. I can't wait for more.
person Tazzy
schedule December 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
EVIL EVIL EEEEVVVIIILLLL!!!!!

You, madam, are an EVIL woman!

*grins* I love you so much right now!

*snerks* and that bit about the walkways was just *lovely* and totally Malfoy-esque!
schedule December 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Now that is what I call a reveal! Brava! Even if I am slightly nauseated (my imagination is far too vivid.). I absolutely love Bubble; I wish I had read his character before I posted my house-elf study, he would have made a category all by himself.
schedule November 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oh oh...
schedule November 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The traps and suspense is killing me!!!!!!!!!!! LOL
person Tazzy
schedule November 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*PURRS*!!!! *purrs*!!!!!PURRS*!!!!!!!

what more can I say but evil woman with your cliffhanger.... *PUUURRRRSS!!!!!*
schedule November 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love the tension, really. I'm sure my bitten nails will grow back as soon as I stop gnawing them to the quick. Y'know, Lucius is free...he should give those disloyal little house elves a sock each and then toss them down the warded corridors as decoys, just like he was bowling for dwarves. Then again, it would upset Hermione. Hmmm, might be worth it, maybe. More please!