rate_review Reviews

I just was made aware of this story by a writer I admire in another fandom. This is fascinating! I've always loved the Harry Potter stories, but this is on an entirely different level. I love the crispness of the writing and the attention to detail that comes from thoroughly knowing what you are talking about. The dialogue flows naturally, and though I'm not used to seeing Draco as a protagonist, he is presented well. And Hermione thinking Lucius gorgeous--that's quite a new idea to me, also. So, many surprises here, but still the excellent, masterful writing we have come to expect from darkephoenix. I will be following this story to its completion, which I'm sure will be another surprise, also! I love a good mystery!

Nice to see Hermione's got brains and isn't willing to let her prejudices iinterfear with a case......

*smirks* Ithin she'd rather enjoy a scene like that, on either side of the whip.....

A great chapter. I look forward to reading more.

well he got her alone in one of the rooms (=-) well that also sucks cause i cant see a way that you could take advantage of that. :) well poor lucius that would suck. i love the place that they are in and it sounds like it would be beautiful to see. i like their little conversation on the way though do update and soon! :)

Dum dum dummmmmmmmm. Always knew Malfoy Sr. was the root of all evil. This story merely validates my long-held belief. *stares at DP long and hard* So where is this building really and what's it really called? :P Wanna hear the rest of the questioning! And yeah, I'd have that suit cleaned too.... Can never be too clean.. :D

Enter villian, stage left! Nice touch with the scrying mirror, makes the whole thing even creepier than before. Now was he/she referring to Hermione, or to the Madam of the Gilded Lily? After all, would a sociopath consider an Auror as a whore? Possibly, but the logic would be even more convoluted than usual. Like this one, it makes me think.

oh this is just too good!!! i do hope that you are going to be updating and really soon too! i love what the lady told hermione about the other submissives. ;) well, well it is lucius and i cant wait to see what you have planned! i do hope that it is coming soon! i really love the idea of draco and luna i think they would be really good together. :) i am dying to know how this turns out! lucius is now supect.............ugh i am dying here!

o.O O.o OMG! That was so good I think I wet myself! *checks* yep! I sure did! Oh, my mind is already racing down a million pathways and I HOPE that this is going where I freakin think its going, cause if it is, I'll have fabulous dreams for the rest of my miserable life! MORE NOW PLEASE! :D

I think Lucius will be upset when he realizes his submissive was so badly damaged that she was unrecognizable. I loved your description of the house, I could almost see it in my head, you have an excellent gift for setting your scenes. More, please!

*grins and purrs* Very Nice....