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Ah, come on!!! You can't leave it there! What's going to happen next? Please update again SOON!!!

Ok, just re-read ch. 70. Fake referred to Liren in the third person for the first time when he said that Narcissa gifted him with the property the moment 'your brother departed this life"--If he died at age 16, she didn't have that authority; if later, then Liren began this debacle and this isn't Liren's spirit and we have a real problem with the force cage. At the very least there is some real personality fragmentation going on here under all the obsessive behavior. If he used the blood of a victim to create the cage, Lucius is going on a diet whether he needs it or not. And what of our two would-be rescuers?

Two ways out: the offspring of our Fake, and the fake's blood, hopefully procured by a swift punch in the snoot. The wards may hold Lucius, but they can't touch Narcissa's sole heir, Draco. Distant third possibility is that since Liren and Lucius are genetically identical, Lucius' blood would also work but with more trouble. Their magical signatures are different so it's a distant third. Potter is a fourth, since his Paternal grandmother may well have been a Black. But since Sanguine Spiritus could also be translated as 'the spirit of the blood', Angus may also be a possibility, if tweaked a bit. or just grab a wet chunk of that melting corpse back there...eww. Gonna be sick now.

You have successfully diverted me from important homework assignments to read through this entire, incredible fic from beginning up to this point. WOW!!!!!!! Soooo good and I am glad I have another fic to drool over you're very good with plot!

oooh! *grins and wiggles excitedly*

I think Lirien just made a Very Big Mistake.....


*cackles*

Polyjuice does not transfer either skills or memories, kinetic or mimetic. This means Faux-liren has had to practice as well, which we saw earlier.Everything depends on how long it has been since learning those skills: if only since the body was removed from stasis, she has an excellent chance--cops fight dirty. Female cops fight dirtier. If the PJ wears off soon, Lucius may have a front row seat to a mudwrestling match! Second thought: Shouldn't Lucius, as lord of the castle, be able to negate anything put up by our perp? Malfoys always have a way out of a trap, even ones they set. The castle wards should have protected him from this, shouldn't they?

Don't stop, keeping going -sits on edge of seat; awaiting next chapter- XD

oooooh!!!

*wry grin* I knw I said I was going to wait until morning to read this, but I couldn't resist.......

*PURRS* More, Mistress.... please????

Oh wow... Now I really wonder... Did they have a third twin?