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January 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I look forward to reading the next chapter.
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January 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
My,my.She is already jealous, isn't she? And he is so sure of himself! ( and does the man stop his sexual activities,ever? wow))
And he has been talking about her...hmmm!
What was the meaning of Bubbles words? *is intrigued*
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I hope it's OK with you!
And he has been talking about her...hmmm!
What was the meaning of Bubbles words? *is intrigued*
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I hope it's OK with you!
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January 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
and the plot thickens. *giggles*
Yeah, everything's just a little too pat, but how would he know what Dawn looked like after if he hadn't seen the body first?
Yeah, everything's just a little too pat, but how would he know what Dawn looked like after if he hadn't seen the body first?
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January 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
well she finally found a hicup, didn't she? ;) well two things one great chapter. :) totally want more. next i really do hope that we get lucuius still being the domonate one, i like it better. :) (though i wont object to you have hermione trying it at least once. :) but what can i say i am more of a sub myself. :) so i just perferre to have some one else be incharge, espically if it was someone like lucius!) please update soon and let us know what happens!
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January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am really loving this story. What little HP fanfic I had read years ago was certainly not in the league with this. I like Draco and Hermione as friends and partners. Draco's showing a softer side, and Hermione is getting respect every way she turns. Yes, what an image burned into her brain. I confess I would be so busy looking at his buff body I wouldn't have noticed the marks on his back. So ... a switch. Wow! Lucius is getting more and more interesting! And so is this story! Thanks for tipping me off that a new chapter was up.
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January 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wouldn't it be lovely if Lucius were the murderer and he were sentenced to be Granger's slave for the rest of his life? Ahhh..... Would that I were Granger. Or that I had Malfoy Sr.'s hair. And after that kinda conversation, she's daring to corner him alone, eh? Niiiiiice.... more more more!
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January 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
First off, great explanation of a healthy D/s relationship - I'm sure its a foreshadowing. However, I do not see Lucius as a sub - sorry.
Now, onto the story. Love the detail and methodical thinking that is going into the writing. I feel like I'm watching a thriller genre film with Rachel Weisz as the female lead "cop." Really, its quite enjoyable.
Now, onto the story. Love the detail and methodical thinking that is going into the writing. I feel like I'm watching a thriller genre film with Rachel Weisz as the female lead "cop." Really, its quite enjoyable.
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January 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I look forward to reading the next chapter to see what happens now that Hermione has figured something out that might help.
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January 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh very good! Very, very good! He is not the murderer of course, even Hermione can see that!
And ...why do i get the feeling that he enjoys playing both roles? hmmm!
And ...why do i get the feeling that he enjoys playing both roles? hmmm!
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January 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Not so odd. I'm sure a very upset elf summoned her master to see what she'd found. Tweak did say she'd informed her master, didn't she? It would be only natural for him to check it first before calling the aurors. I also love that image of Lucius bound to that bar, by the way.