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for Harvest Moon

by vbruce

schedule January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
First off: Draco and Luna - LOVE IT. Such a unique pairing and I like it.

Thanks for the glimpse of the murderer...there are clues aplenty and I'm wracking my brain.

Lucius is baiting Hermione and she's so taking it. I love how Draco sees exactly what's going on and is just sitting on the sidelines. I think we all agree that Lucius is dangerous but is not the killer and oh what fun he'll have with gorgeous Granger.

Cannot wait for Samhain.
schedule January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOW! Okay I am now offically hooked! You have to update this again and soon! I can't wait to read more!

Tiffany
schedule January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I look forward to reading more.
person Anon
schedule January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I can't wait to read chapter ten.
person Anon
schedule January 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love it. Simply wonderful chapters. I love the plot. I really like that you keep hermione and lucius relistic...not out of characters. I'm also happy that you don't make hermione afraid of lucius. I can't wait to read a chpater between lucius and hermione together. Im hoping you update soon. I can't wait to read chapter nine. Great job. I'm enjoy this story. I can't wait to read another chapter....update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Tazzy
schedule January 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*snickers* Hermione tries to keep from being prejudiced but it doesn't work at times, does it?

And poor Lucius, unable to get any play time with Hermione trying to breathe down his neck for answers.
schedule January 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hermione just wanted to go to the manor in the sunconscious pursuit of Naked-As-A-Jay-Bird Lucius. I would too. Do you have directions I can borrow? A nutter house elf, ay? Haven't heard that one before. Though, it seems logical enough. Now I'm all curious what the far-seeing Bubble means. Next chapter! X-D
schedule January 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I was laughing out loud at the end of this chapter: "Hermeione has an odd tendency to interrupt my playtime. I wonder if it
schedule January 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOW!

My goodness, you certainly know a lot about BDSM. I have rarely seen someone actually display their knowledge of such things in a positive fashion. There are a few, though.

Very well done story, too. I can't wait to see who the murderer is, although I have a couple of notions.
person Madietta
schedule January 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what a well written story. It's not very often in fan fiction that you find a story written within a certain genre, and written this well for that matter. Since mystery is my favorite genre, I am totally hooked. Excellently rendered, great character interactions, wonderful descriptions, just the right level of suspense. You have my undivided attention. I am very much looking forward to an update. Cheers, Madietta