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February 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I think that even though Lucius believes that his twin brother died, he should inform both Hermione and Draco of the possiblity that maybe his death was greatly over exagerated and that it could be Liren that is killing those women. I look forward to the next chapter.
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February 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Things are really heating up. I have an idea about Taz's partner, but will keep it to myself. I can't wait to read more. Update again and soon!
Tiffany
Tiffany
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February 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*giggles* Yeah, I can see that happening. Even Lady Heather in CSI Las Vegas would be more than happy to help out the cops if someone was targeting her business.
*snerks* And I just wonder who that business partner is....
Another lovely chapter, darling!
*snerks* And I just wonder who that business partner is....
Another lovely chapter, darling!
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January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I think that Lucius is the partner/owner of the business. I hope that Hermione and Draco can eventually figure out who is murdering all of the women Lucius has been seen with and clear his name. I look forward to reading more.
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January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
the plot thickens
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January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Not only Lucius, but Taz seems to know more than she's willing to say at the moment. I'm glad Luna and Draco will be at the party for backup Wonder what the ex-wife has to say... Excellent story, I look forward to each chapter. Your writing just gets better and better.
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January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice setup chapter (10) and I am a very hooked reader. Much to think about!
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January 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*waits for the dramatic chord to play before continuing* What a pushy prick. Love him. Think he needs a spanking. The plot thickens and the disembodied voice gets more and more evil! I think the house elves should poison their master. Eagerly awaiting more!
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January 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Is Lucius really interested in Hermione for herself or is he up to something? I can see Hermione is interested in him but in denial about it, so that leaves Lucius as the pursuer for the time being. I didn't see that one coming. Don't have a clue yet who the villain is, but it seems he really has it in for Lucius. Very interesting chapter. You're such a clean writer, nothing is there by accident. Excellent work!
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January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think Lucius has enough experience to know when eh's being targeted, as well as the moxie to protect his family. Love the 'Rocky Horror' elves, by the way. And if you studied at the Body Farm, I'm impressed. You also have a much stronger stomach than I do, I must say! ;)