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by vbruce

schedule February 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
GAH! You're the greatest, Ate! Thank you so much! :") This is the greatest bday present I've ever gotten my leaps and bounds! So... gimme a min to go change my panties and then I'll come back and review... Ok, I'm collected. That was lovely! Love Hermione's reaction ;) At least she kept SOME measure of composure, cause I woulda just swiped all the DVDs and dashed out of the place cackling as I went. I knew Draco was gonna wuss out when it came to the tapes. At least, I was REALLY REALLY praying he would. lol The killer is a sicko but the whole deadly dance practice was hot! Thank you thank you thank you thank you!
schedule February 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hmm who was that man at the beginning? was it lucius??? hmmm
schedule February 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yes, I believe my reaction to thrashing Lucius would be about the same, but it might take longer for me to notice anything else in the dvd! I find it very believable that a man so focussed on control would find a way to give it up from time to time. Good chapter!
person Tazzy
schedule February 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Twin brother? *raises a brow* Oh my, the interesting things you let drop, darling.
schedule February 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, they say nobody fights like family, don't they? Pity this is a murder mystery, a double dose of Malfoy would be, er, interesting.
schedule February 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmm..... I think I have a loose idea of where this is all going now. But because I got that from reading this chapter, I'm more sure that you're leading me there and I dunno squat. So... I'm dying to know what's REALLY happening. And which one of our oh-so-lucky duo gets to watch Malfoy Sr.'s amateur DVD? Something tells me that even though Draco follows in his sexual appetite foot prints, he prolly isn't all that revved up about SEEING his father in practice. I have goosebumps. more please!
schedule February 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Whaat is Lucius thinking? Does he think he may know who is behind this? I can't wait to see how Hermione reacts to this!

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Tiffany
schedule February 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wooooow!! Liren hey? So you give us two suspects! This twin brother ( oh my, two Lucius around, that is to good to be true) and Severus! Hmmm, well, i have a request, please , please don't make Severus the bad guy!
schedule February 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, how interesting! A non corpus potion! Someone has it in for poor Lucius. Are they working from beyond the grave? So the only women being killed are those who have 'played' with Lucius? So now we see him as the protagonist. What'll we do with all the animosity we have toward him? Turn it toward a new villain, it seems. Very good chapter, though short.
schedule February 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, a 16 year old who could brew a potion like that? That's interesting. I like the Liren twist...makes me wonder! I like how Lucius is being so forthright.