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March 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is so fascinating! It gets more and more intriguing each chapter!
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March 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I rather liked this chapter but was thrown by the poem/song. It just seemed a touch out of place. However, I liked the flashbacks and Lucius getting caught up in his past.
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March 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Mmmmmmmm. Shirtless Lucius. *Grins lasciviously* Great update, and as always, I can't wait for more!
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March 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad to see Lucius has a means to defend himself; I have a sneaking suspicion he will be in need of it. If you have ever seen Jackie Chan's 'Drunken Master', there is a wonderful sequence of the use of the chinese flexible spear. I found myself thinking of that during your description of his kata exercises. It's one of Chan's earlier films, made for the Hong Kong market.
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March 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
bum-bum bum bum bum bummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm. *looks suspiciously at Narcissa* liar liar robes on fire. *humps Draco while no one's looking* I wonder if this is going in the direction I think it's going in, or if I'm delusional or if you're gonna rip the rug out from under me at the last minute! *steps off the rug* ha! more please!
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March 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
and the plot thickens.....
*grabs seeing eye dog* Gonna need one if the plot gets any thicker.
*grins* Definitely keep it going!!!
*grabs seeing eye dog* Gonna need one if the plot gets any thicker.
*grins* Definitely keep it going!!!
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March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay, i'm thoroghly intreged at this point. I can't wait to see what happens next! Update soon! Pretty please!
Tiffany
Tiffany
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March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oops! Hermione is now standing up for Lucius. What an odd change of circumstances, and she did it without even realising she was doing it. She's definitely considering him in a new way. And odd that someone outside the Malfoy family should know or have heard that Lucius' twin may NOT have died at sixteen, but been paralysed. That's certainly a motive and reason to suspect that he may be the one trying to frame Lucius. Great chapter, darkephoenix, well-written and provocative.
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March 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Echoes of the Borgias, the Medici, the Valois, the Wars of the Roses,and a few others. Nothing like a little Cain and able to jump start a family feud. but I think it's far more likely Liren was attempting a pre-emptive strike and it backfired. So Narcissa is involved? Makes sense--he could hardly manage this on his own, could he?
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March 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter. I look forward to reading more. I think that Narcissa is keeping a major secret from her son. I think that Liren is at her home because of what she said before Draco entered the room. I hope that she is careful and doesn't get hurt by him.