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*shudders* why are the bits and pieces always kept in freaking jars. I supposed it's better than... erm... tupperware :/ Love where this is going! It makes me wonder how much Narcissa knows and whether or not she cares. Crazy minds think alike, right? I wonder if Lucius and hermione will end up humping in the library?! AHH! I'm going crazy with... wonder....!

I am thoroughly enjoying this fic! Your attention to detail, characterization and grammar makes this so easy to read. I like that we will be able to see the relationship develop between Lucius and Hermione (and I am hoping that the Gilded Lily comes into play a bit later on????) and not just be thrown in. Most fics that do this are unrealistic and definitely do not stand out.
I am wondering if the proprietress of The Gilded Lily is based on Lady Heather from CSI at all?

Ch 8:
Things are getting interesting, indeed! Lucius telling people how "lovely" Hermione is is an interesting development.
Oh, to be Lucius Malfoy's playmate.....*swoon* AND him in the black breeches and the boots...*fans self*....*swoons again*
This is excellent!

Ch 10:
I am thinking that Lucius is the mysterious owner of The Gilded Lily....am I correct???

Ch 11:
I was right! I have a sneaking suspicion now that Lucius's twin maybe didn't die but went a bit mad and is now out for revenge...will have to read on to see, I suppose. Oh darn :-P

Ch 15:
I am thinking that Narcissa knows about Lucius's twin brother and perhaps is in cahoots with him! What in the world! This is soooo good! Please keep the updates coming ASAP!

Ch 16:
Okay, let me just try to clear up the huge puddle of drool off of my keyboard......Lucius. Shirtless. With a long spear in hand....Oh wait, more drool! LOL

Ch 17:
It seems that no matter how hard I try to find the "Next Chapter" button to click on, I am unsuccessful.....what is wrong with this picture??? I need more...NOW! LOL!
On to the intimate questions between Lucius and Hermione sitting on a tiny setee...

I just came upon your story and it is unbelievably good. It is well written and your characters are OOC without being to outrageous. I am a fan of OOC however it becomes tedious when they are a complete 180 of how they were originally written. I like the relationship you have between Draco and Hermione. I just have no idea how your going to get Lucius and Hermione together with Draco being ever present in her life. He already knows far more than he is comfortable with and If Hermione becomes involved all sorts of awkward situations will present themselves. This is really and original plot and I love that you don't have page after page of smut, that becomes boring. This is a brilliant fic and I can't wait to read more. Well done!!!!

i can't wait to find out what happens next. Update again and soon.

Tiffany